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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Hi Catie this is a heartrendering piece, your poetry has matured I like where your going love Jayne x

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Thinks Cat , for the comment, you got some good literature. Talk to you soon!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Deep, intense and poignant write dear Catie. Impressive, how you pen these emotions that are so touching. Excellent piece!

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Catie, wow, this poem is stunning in its raw emotions and reality, full of wonderful lines, so deeply written . . . "you cannot see how much I am hurting inside" . . . oh yes, the mask we place on each day to hide the hurt, how many masks do I have? many!!! well done, constance

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Received it, re-sended it ... and jumping! : )

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 2:56:00 PM
    Where is it? I didnt get any Soup Mail! : )

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 1:52:00 PM
    So profound dear dear friend..My heart aches with each verse..Charma

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Soup Mail!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:00:00 AM
    I love these lines: "covered with bile in gastric snowflake patterns."... "to cover it, to bleed upon it,/ like wax covers then bleeds down wine bottles." The line repeated is a crushing one! Very emotive and sad, Catie. Now, please-please tell me this is just pure fiction. The word morphine gives me goosebumps. A big hug.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:45:00 AM
    No one knows what tomorrow brings ..... Enjoy your day today ..... it is yours Catie! - A poem with deep emotion, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)