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Falling Without Winter Wings Alliteration Collaboration

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Falling Without Winter Wings Alliteration Collaboration

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                                                                                                                                                                            CC                                                                                                                                         My mind sometimes goes there, somewhere, nowhere, 
amongst the shooting shining stars, floating like in a womb, yet not afraid, 
free falling flakes, weightless – wondering why, where 
from the highest branch I lost my grip gasping, grasping 
and tumbling hopelessly DOWN AND DOWN DEEP… into the unknown
 
PD
DOWN AND DOWN DEEP, I allowed myself to fall like a raindrop, 
landing a little like winter, holding my breath, above the mountaintop, 
a tremble brought about by the breeze, losing myself completely, 
Wandering in welters of wasting words, Into the fire of all my torrid tears,  
I slip into despair into the cold, a chilling fall, after LETTING GO…
 
CC
LETTING GO was the hard part, the horrid heartbreak, it always will be. 
We had climbed so high, so high we had to come down 
and as we stumbled we slipped, we slid, slowly away from one another 
because we had lost ourselves, our own identities. 
My journey now must be to like -- LOVE MYSELF AGAIN. 

PD
LOVE MYSELF AGAIN, a never-ending task. 
Holding on to what was and always will be a falling star. 
Wishing, the wind would lift us up and put us back where we belong. 
Sinking, dipping, dropping, and drowning with the sea, 
A path I seek when I find myself losing grip of reality. 




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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Craig

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:06:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your well-deserved grand win and marvelous collaboration poem my dear friend Craig! Hugs and cheers to both of you (with my dearest poet sis PD)! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Very enjoyable poem...and love the way it smoothly flows. Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:30:00 PM

    An amazing collaboration........what a great team and poem this is! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Hello Craig, loving this one again... Congrats... PD

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Wow! This was breathtaking. So moving. Loved the collaboration idea? Great! Jen

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:07:00 AM

    Hello my dear friend Craig! This is my third time to read this outstanding collaboration poem of yours and our dearest friend PD. I really love it. I told my dearest sis PD, this is very creative and unique one, a very special kind of alliteration which I've learned a lot from it. A precious gem from both of you which I'll keep in my fav. treasure box. Thank you so much for sharing and your very wonderful comment again in one of my latest poems. Happy St. Patrick's Day! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:50:00 PM

    As I told PD, this is really awesome, and it's sure cool to see you two doing a poem together. What brought this about? You guys really matched each other well!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:34:00 AM

    It is said that two heads think better than one ..... Here is a good proof of that!! - Very, very well done!! - I wish you luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:39:00 PM

    As I replied at PD the masterpiece we always know we will get from you two. Great job..

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Craig, thanks so much.. I was not sure, of my ending...Adding the alliteration, was so much fun... thanks... LINDA

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/13/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha...look at all the green on your page.. (avatars..)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:45:00 PM

    i'm a big fan of both. good luck in this tough contest. I know nothing of alliteration. good luck in the contest. Sandyivy

    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/13/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    She hasn't posted yet--sort of stylishly late shall we say!
    Ivy D Avatar Sandy Ivy D Date: 3/13/2013 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Craig, I stopped by pd's poetry. is her poem under a different title.I did not see the collaboration
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:12:00 PM

    You both did a great job! Best of luck in Nathan's contest! Ruben.