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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Nah...No you did not? didn t ate a grasshopper..Funny poem but geeee..i can t even stand it on me : )

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:30:00 PM
    I got a good laugh out of this one. You're very good with humorous writing. I really like all of the detail. Nice work! Jack

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:43:00 PM
    You don't need to apologize for a fun poem. There are kids here are Soup as well and I am one BIG KID too. I bet you really did eat that grasshopper because you have told me the awful things you hunt and eat. hahaha. I would rather dip a grasshopper in chocolate and eat it, than to eat a raccoon or rabbit. haha

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:15:00 PM
    As for me I appreciate the humor, sounds Um Um good.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Caleb this was awesome...I was just waiting on the line about spitting out the brown tobacco juice in your eye!....

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Hi Caleb, it takes some skill to pull this kind of light-poetry off. It definitely works for me. Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:15:00 PM
    you made me smile!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:24:00 PM
    So cute! I can see why your kids got a kick out of this one. I'm sure the last two lines had them in stitches! I love your warning at the end too. Now I'm SO curious about what's in store for your next few poems.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:53:00 PM
    Cute!...makes me think of an Irish farmer for some reason...and a great poem to invite imagination in kids =) and thanks for the last comment, by the way, and check out your review: got some time to work on my own stuff! <3-Lauryn