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Ode To Yoda

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Ode To Yoda

Hindsight, as a gift good it would be
Ours if only to have it we could
Misery, to stop it for you and me
People not to meet, good be that would.

Hearts broken, not they would be
Heartbreak, not happen it would
Love true, we would see
Hindsight, as a gift, be good it would

Corners to turn, not turn them we would 
In hindsight, save us it would, we see
Troubles save us,  many it would
Life with hindsight, good it should be

Challenges though, would few be
Need them we do to grow
In hindsight, them we cannot see
Learn we must from our woe.

Forgiveness, a reason for this there is
Mistakes many to ourselves we lay bare
In hindsight also trouble there is
Need it when we do, it’s never there.

© 13/03/2013 ~GG~
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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:40:00 PM

    A good message in your poem Mandy, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:21:00 AM

    great write and win Mandy...congrats

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:48:00 PM

    number one you are, congrats on a deserved winner...

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Congratulations and on your wonderful win

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:25:00 PM

    MANDY, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Great poem Mandy. Congratulation! Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, nice job! Jen

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:19:00 AM

    The last line sums it up perfectly!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Another perfect message in Yoda talk--Mandy this is great, and to rhyme in these quatrains. Honored to share this with you as well!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Mandy, you have shown how to write yoda....Seren

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:22:00 AM

    Mandy...Awesome. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:11:00 AM

    Excellent indeed, Congratulations, Mandy.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:55:00 AM

    This is a great take on Yoda-speak. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:43:00 AM

    Like Yoda you think. Like Yoda you write. On your top placement congratulations we give!"

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:19:00 PM

    Mandy, you rocked this. Not only did you catch the essence of his speech pattern, but of his thought pattern. First place, see this, do I! LOL... :)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:54:00 PM

    hey, this sounds just like Yoda. REally nice one, Mandy!!! (sorry if I have missed any of your blogs lately. I have been really busy at work and Joe is always home now trying to find work. It's really hard making time for Soup these days and I miss when I would be here for hours sometimes!!)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:12:00 AM

    nicely penned Mandy...best wishes

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:31:00 AM

    Hi Mandy not a star wars fan but this is brill, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:22:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem Mandy, good luck int the contest, love xxx

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Nicely done Mandy for Ode to Yoda and including a lesson to learn. I think it will definitely place as a win. Tricky writing I thought, but I enjoyed writing one too. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:23:00 PM

    Mandy I like the poem but who is Yoda?...David

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:12:00 PM

    A great job you did, Padawan Mandy! Although, little difficult to read it is ... a very good time I had. In the winners list this poem will be. With you may the Force be. : D !!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:47:00 AM

    To be shared, a very clever poem, to be read you have written... Terry