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A Piece Of Me

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A Piece Of Me

So you want a piece of me
Well here I am, take it
Think you know me so well 
Then why treat me like **it.

There are not many pieces left
You better take yours now
If you dare to take it
If not I’ll show you how.

Time and time you goad me 
Time and again I fold
Well not this time pal
Take all the pieces you can hold.

When you have the pieces 
Build them back up to find me
Then see what you have lost
When you take that piece from me.

© 13/03/2013 
Contest Entry
A work of fiction

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:15:00 AM
    you really know how to dig deep, with in one's sentiments, this poem, could reflex on the whole world as it is now, although personified, you truly do touch on the way life is today!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/17/2013 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there harry thanks for another smashing comment form you I do miss you around xx
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:22:00 PM
    How can one not recognize this as a winner..... Magnificently done...... Jake

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/16/2013 4:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John I appreciate your lovely comment xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 11:36:00 PM
    Painful and deep. Awesome Mandy.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/14/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And many thanks to you too Tahera I love an 'awesome on a comment ' xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Wow...awesome

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    Date: 3/14/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Donna xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:21:00 PM
    i like it!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/14/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ilene xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 AM
    I wonder which one is "that" piece ... : )You did it great and you're going to be in the winners' list. Very nice, Mandy. Ruben (Ex-Ex Ruben).

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/14/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ruben, just realised I have two poems with this title lol, and congrats are going to the other one xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Good contest material, Mandy. I'm glad you noted it's a work of fiction, but you've made it very much alive. Well done and good luck to you in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:13:00 AM
    This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this morning! What a remarkable piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/14/2013 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell xx
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Mandy, I wouldn't dare be so bold to attempt to take a piece of you - I cherish my own health and well-being - ;-) Good job and good luck in the contest. Joe

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    Date: 3/13/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha, thanks Joe you are a pal, xx