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A Whole New World

On the day when I was born,
I opened my eyes,
cried with fright,
and
saw the new world.
It was the day
of happiness
of father and mother.
From that day
until now,
the past ten years,
I learn and see
the whole new world
in front of me...............

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Dear Winchaya, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " A Whole New World" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Superb Free Verse. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:24:00 PM

    Winchaya, , your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:15:00 PM

    I'm just eleven years old. Please tell me if I wrote or spelled anything wrong. :)