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  1. Date: 1/24/2014 7:10:00 PM

    I guess in this case I arrived late.

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 11:36:00 AM

    I thought I knew this one and see I have come back to a wonderful poem and one the whole world should have access to. I could read it over and over. Congratulations from the heart. SuZ

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 3:02:00 PM

    I remember reading this one before and being impressed by it; this is exactly the sort of free verse I like to read...and wasn't this the one that somebody had a go at rewriting? I wouldn't change a thing in this, I think it's perfect the way it is...and thanks so much for your lovely comment on my poem :)

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:36:00 PM

    I remember this poem, one of my favorites, I love it (just exactly as it is). It's going in my favorites again :)

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:14:00 PM

    What an awesome write, Ruben. I am overwhelmed.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 6:36:00 PM

    Ah yes Ruben...VERY familiar with this wisdom filled gem of yours...Nice to see it again because it fits like a well worn, comfortable old shoe...Congrats, Tim

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 10:05:00 PM

    Well done congrats. Russell

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 10:49:00 PM

    Beautiful write dear friend. Many congrats Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:48:00 PM

    an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Ruben, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~ WOW

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:10:00 PM

    What a nice write you have here Ruben. It could represent many things. Even this crazy weather. I sent you a soup mail. RAY

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:44:00 PM

    You have so much insight..... I want to fav this poem and mark you as a Favorite Poet so I never lose you again in this big soup pot. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:40:00 AM

    You drove your message home SO well. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:07:00 PM

    Excellent poem, Ruben. At first, I thought you were speaking of a smile, then as I read further, I could see I was wrong. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Not surprised to see this again Ruben, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 5:26:00 PM

    woo hoo !! Another win with this one !! It's great !! Love it !!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Yep...loved this the first time I read it...Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:38:00 AM

    Wow Ruben great stuff.....I love the peaches to eat! Donna

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Very Descriptive!! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:49:00 AM

    I love your postscript!!! So true!! Wow this poem.........what can I say? I want to step into those moments and not have them fade......but they will and they do, until they can come again...(or until I rewind them!) :) Love it!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Once again, my friend, congrats on your win with this beautifully written poem. Rick

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:07:00 PM

    A very descriptive write, Ruben! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:01:00 PM

    soup mail,,, once again...

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:15:00 PM

    One of your best, Ruben. Glad to see it with another win. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:28:00 PM

    great write and win Ruben...congrats

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:16:00 PM

    Ruben, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:42:00 PM

    quite a work of virtuosity! I don't profess to fully understand it but I recognize great poetry when I read it, congrats on this exceptional winning piece :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Ruben, a pretty good winning poem... , congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Great poem Ruben. Congrats on your top win!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:47:00 AM

    So awesome a poem is this dear Ruben, a true masterpiece!