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It May Arrive Late

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                It may arrive late
                hidden behind a melancholic sunset,
                or inside one of those melodies, one of those scents,
                that rescue the pebbles bouncing off the water,

                at the beginning of those fifty moves that expect a draw,
                as if the supposed king could turn the hour glass over,
                or among the sparkling dust that flees from things,
                we may no longer be accumulating.

                It's a single moment, in a sudden, intense disclosure, 
                free from fear, full of answers, and eager to step in.
                It's a sunbeam bursting through clouds of complacence,
                of an existing situation or a redundant condition.

                It may arrive late
                to get rid of our weighty dreams, our dense illusions,
                picking the petals off our to be's, to have's, to do's ...
                and almost, at times, to wake us or wake us not.

                And when it arrives, when we acknowledge and accept it,
                without being able to get away from it, we could understand.
                We could understand that there may be one from all
                the colors that we certainly won't see again, if we ever saw them all.

                Or roads to walk, books to read, songs to hum, peaches to eat ...
                And we may finally see the protagonist and recognize the sketch
                of our only one-time story, the real one. And you could say two;
                and you could refuse the intrussion; and you could lie to yourself.

                Like a broken porcelain doll in front of a cracked mirror
                waking the echoes of our immune arrogance, our ephemeral victories.
                And eventually, the rushing spindle of the days could lose our interest,
                and the pieces of the jigsaw puzzle could not fit together.
 
                It may arrive late, with the lights off,
                fragile as an afterthought or bold to face it all.
                It can last as long as a thought lasts, or persist infinitely,
                as a first kiss, as the laugh of children, as a farewell ...







Just in case: The fifty-moves rule in chess intend to prevent players from wasting time by playing random moves that lead nowhere. Under this rule, if no pawns are moved and no captures are made in fifty consecutive moves, the game is declared a draw.

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:10:00 PM

    What a nice write you have here Ruben. It could represent many things. Even this crazy weather. I sent you a soup mail. RAY

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:44:00 PM

    You have so much insight..... I want to fav this poem and mark you as a Favorite Poet so I never lose you again in this big soup pot. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:40:00 AM

    You drove your message home SO well. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:07:00 PM

    Excellent poem, Ruben. At first, I thought you were speaking of a smile, then as I read further, I could see I was wrong. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Not surprised to see this again Ruben, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 5:26:00 PM

    woo hoo !! Another win with this one !! It's great !! Love it !!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:30:00 AM

    Yep...loved this the first time I read it...Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:38:00 AM

    Wow Ruben great stuff.....I love the peaches to eat! Donna

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Very Descriptive poem...wow!! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:49:00 AM

    I love your postscript!!! So true!! Wow this poem.........what can I say? I want to step into those moments and not have them fade......but they will and they do, until they can come again...(or until I rewind them!) :) Love it!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Once again, my friend, congrats on your win with this beautifully written poem. Rick

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:07:00 PM

    A very descriptive write, Ruben! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:01:00 PM

    soup mail,,, once again...

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:15:00 PM

    One of your best, Ruben. Glad to see it with another win. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:28:00 PM

    great write and win Ruben...congrats

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:16:00 PM

    Ruben, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:42:00 PM

    quite a work of virtuosity! I don't profess to fully understand it but I recognize great poetry when I read it, congrats on this exceptional winning piece :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Ruben, a pretty good winning poem... , congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Great poem Ruben. Congrats on your top win!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:47:00 AM

    So awesome a poem is this dear Ruben, a true masterpiece!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Trying to puzzle out what "it" might be, and the best fit seems to be death, but it could be something else. Congratulations on your top win, Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:53:00 PM

    Loved the depth of this..yes eat ALL the peaches! Thanks so much for your wonderful effort! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:31:00 AM

    One favorite line among many...First line of 7th verse...Love how you took the game of chess and ran with it...referring to nature, music and scent to begin, then shifting to life lessons with great wisdom and insight shown...You've topped yourself again my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:59:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Ruben. Congratulations. Cheers. Rick

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:40:00 AM

    Ruben, this is truly an outstanding write, within it are so many wonderous lines, that I myself can relate to, it includes a message that each should heed, sometimes I feel like that broken porcelain doll, hopefull one day I will be complete again, working on it, constance

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 11:26:00 PM

    I don t usually follow who won or didn t but i had to congratulate you on this sad beautiful masterpiece..I had five mins here on ps and had to reread this beauty.You shine like a golden knickle Ruben..bravo..Charmaine

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:37:00 PM

    RUBEN, this is a nice winning poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 10:42:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL ACHIEVEMENT HERE, RUBEN. You should be exceptionally proud! Thank U for dropping by..Much appreciated...truly.

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:34:00 PM

    Ruben congrats on your big win, this is really beautiful and deep, loved the way you uttered those beautiful words :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:08:00 PM

    Ruben... Another great epic poem, intense thought on the use of archaic moves every person individually can observe then understand...yep you guessed I await your entry....David

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