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World Around Me




The first time I opened my eyes
To the world full of many lies

I learned something around me
Looking everywhere, so much to see

Killing of people, wars for selfish reasons
Fighting for positions, cases for abortions

Hunger for power, unstoppable
Drug addictions, uncontrollable 

I see death with my eyes, a horrible sight 
A bad experience, but I’m absolutely right 



For Debbie’s Contest
March 12, 2013






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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:12:00 AM

    This is excellent write about the reality of life now a days my dear friend, Maria!I love it so much. This is already a winner for me. Thank you so much again for your precious time reading and enjoying my poems leaving me wonderful and inspirational comments. Good luck always and take care! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Those who believe life is easy to live ....... open your eyes! - Very well written, Maria. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)