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Haiku 5

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Haiku 5

a thousand doors
opening all at once -
giving birth

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:42:00 PM
    ooo..I like the way you entered this world... many possibilities... good ones and bad ones. To bad the doors don't come with labels.... always~ LINDA

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/19/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think even with labels the curiosity of the unknown would still compel us to take a peak inside...
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:34:00 AM
    ..... The world is full of possibilities. Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/14/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! The newborn has the whole world in front of him...
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:31:00 AM
    A nice little gem, so much said in so few words!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/13/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Raul!
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 11:05:00 PM
    This one is very fascinating and mysterious!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/12/2013 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, I'm very grateful and humbled by your comments. I've been here less than a week and you have already checked out several of my poems... much thanks, my friend! :)
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Timothy, I really like the feeling of vastness and enormity in this poem. I've mentioned this to someone else here once before, but I think it's very difficult to make small poems feel large and expansive, but you did it very well here. Cheers! -Jeremy

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/12/2013 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I really appreciate your perceptive comment. My goal was to make the first moments of birth feel "enormous" (as you say) in a few choice words.
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 5:48:00 PM
    Could go so many ways with the interpertation of this one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the uplifting visits..Sara

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/12/2013 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Sara! I like to be somewhat vague in my haiku...