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Kaleidoscopic Pieces

Id ego super-ego
Parent adult child
Extroverson/introversion
Feelings thoughts actions
Sensing intuition
Nature or nurture
Feelings again?
Theories theories
Do not help
I am in pieces

Depression
Hopeless
Numb

Gone

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:05:00 PM

    My heart feels so bad for the narrator--you paint many things that lead to the conclusion. I like the shape being sort of like a Kaleidoscope.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:22:00 AM

    (I feel for you.) - Well written Rick ! - Luck in contest ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:30:00 PM

    Nicely done, Rick! Best of luck in the Contest!Ruben.