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Lyric Advice

Eileen Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Lyric Advice which was written by poet Eileen Manassian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lyric Advice

Hide, Hide
Deep inside
All those things
That drive you wild

Hush, hush
Not a sound
Of the secret
Love you've found

Cover, cover
Undercover
Keep the passion
You discover

Dream, dream
A steady stream
All the things that
Make you scream

Touch, touch
Reach and touch
All the things 
You crave so much

Kiss, kiss
A gentle kiss
To the ones 
who bring you bliss

Sip, Sip
Take a sip
Of all the things
That wet your lip

Burn, burn
Ignite and burn
With all the things
That make you yearn

Glow, glow
Release your glow
In waves of light
That let love flow

Sigh, sigh
Let out a sigh
For all the things
That make you fly

Eat, eat
Be quick to eat
All those things
That make life sweet

Seek, Seek
Play hide and seek
With the ones
Who make you weak

Feel, Feel
Wake up and feel
All the things 
That make life real.

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Eileen.... you're my favourite agony aunt, lol, wonderful, well done. Regards Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/13/2013 5:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, if agony is what you're looking for and are into....you're in the right place. I do have a sense of humor though...it just likes to make a grand entrance now and then! :) Thanks for the visit! :)
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:07:00 AM
    This is so great Eileen, you seem to be filled with inspiration these days.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/13/2013 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard...ever watch that movie, The Thornbirds with Richard Chamberlain? The story goes that these birds sing their most beautiful some when they've been impaled by a thorn....I guess that sort of applies to my writing these days!
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:17:00 AM
    it does get you like that sometimes your fingers seem to write for oyu don't they , wel they did a good job here xx

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/12/2013 2:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Mandy! :) Well...this comment of yours has my flying high! :)
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:31:00 PM
    i'll bet this just flew out of you. it's great!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/11/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ilene...you know me so well! It did...I couldn't get to the computer fast enough! Was scared some of it would just fly right out of my scattered brained head! ;) Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM
    I like this one..We all need to be where we can feel..Sometimes things in life happen that hinder that from happening..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/11/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OOOPPPPSSS! Sara....thanks ever so much for your post! I don't know how this got mixed up! Can I blame the meds? ;) Thanks for the post! I appreciate it! Hugs!
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/11/2013 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Robert...thanks ever so much for this lovely post. I have been unwell, but I'm on the mend. This poem came to me in a strange way...and I couldn't get to the computer fast enough to get it all down! :) Simple...yet...what I feel at the moment!
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:43:00 PM
    This rhythem sets a mandate to the way I write my words. It sets the beat so very sweet like tapping little birds. I hope you have all of these things that you've joyfully said. For if your sick may life lift you completely out of bed. :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/11/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Robert...thanks ever so much for this lovely post. I have been unwell, but I'm on the mend. This poem came to me in a strange way...and I couldn't get to the computer fast enough to get it all down! :) Simple...yet...what I feel at the moment!