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nothing but more questions

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nothing but more questions

She walked off into peripheral, feral and alone
a lonely individual, trudging on the stone
out into the element, not welcome back home
beautiful, intelligent, yet worn to the bone
routine was reality, cause real wasn't known
she told me,  feeling this , felt as a drone
fear and shaky ground, surely made her prone
falling unsupported, the state still condoned
this way or that, no attention could be loaned
prevention proving problematic
 past parodies partly shone
privacy trumps compassion, it happens she's grown
so my effort to recover info, unfruitful, lay sown
 nothing but more questions, and my sad little poem
 nothing but more questions, and my sad little poem

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:56:00 PM
    The last two lines are really powerful, I like that you repeated them. Well done, I really love this poem. :)

    Payne Avatar Davin Payne
    Date: 3/25/2013 9:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much. This poem is very special to me.