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my emotions

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my emotions

even though I have weak emotions,trying not lose control of
myself,trying to care for someone but it doesn't work,Did I fail
for caring for you,I think about smiling but the fear of doing that
makes me tremble,screaming or shouting doesn't do anything
am I in my breaking,is my heart breaking even more,tell
me,what should I do,wondering and pondering if this life will go
away,these emotions of mine is like dust
and let these emotion fly away.

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  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Very deep poem, I can relate. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out my poetry. You might like it.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:44:00 PM
    David, emotions will take you everywhere.. deep and far... i like the way you display yours against the flying wind.. very sad in a way... enjoyed~ Linda