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Haiku 2

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Haiku 2

a blown bubble
shattering into mist -
your embrace

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  1. Date: 1/7/2014 4:27:00 PM

    This could go all sorts of ways and that is what a Haiku should do. Congrats. daver

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 12:30:00 AM

    Timothy ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Like this. Congratulations. Rick

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/21/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick! :)
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Wow Timothy...every time I read this I find a different meaning I could imagine! Sorry about the delayed congrats...its been a very stormy tornatic day in my neck of the world for two days

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/20/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry to hear that, Donna! There has been quite a bit of drama for me as well... trying to make time for the Soup, but it's not always easy!
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:14:00 PM

    Thank you all for the congratulations below me (and any that might appear above this comment). This is one of my faves and I'm happy it did well in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:40:00 PM

    passion splash!!! Congrats on the HM. I sure like this one.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Well done Tim

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Congrats on your fine win in the contest. Well done. AO

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:04:00 AM

    Congratulations Tim., very nice. Love T.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:23:00 AM

    Awww, very sweet!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/11/2013 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Dindy! YOU are very sweet, methinks :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Timothy, nice. Always,~ LINDA

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/10/2013 3:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate your input. Your images with the mother blowing bubbles wasn't what I imagined, but I think it's great to see different angles of the same piece.
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:13:00 PM

    You arre very intuitive! I always wanted to be an elementary school teacher, at one time I did have a pre-school BUT the Flower Children poem was for a contest by a friend with a 4 year old girl learning the alphabet, so I did ok? YOU are correct in not naming your haiku, numbering them is best [though you can put the first line in the title space & that's Ok too!] now ..remember do not capitalize & that's a very nice haiku! Light & Love

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aha I guess halfway right!... lol. I find titles for haiku somewhat distracting. They are so short that I feel the poem should speak for itself. Capitalizing haiku isn't "technically" correct, but I'm sort of OCD about capitalization... haha, maybe soon I can change my ways!
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Really great imaginary that you shared, thank you for your kindly visit before to my page :) and welcome to Poetry Soup, enjoyed my reading this morning :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 6:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    'Twas a pleasure and how kind of you to also reply to one of mine! I haven't met one unkind person yet on this site!
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:35:00 PM

    It's nice to see new faces here on the Soup Timothy, especially when they are as kind as you! Your Haiku is exquisite, so very nicely done! I really enjoyed reading it tonight, Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the warm welcome! Haiku is one of my favorite forms to write in...
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 2:02:00 PM

    really creative..... Jake

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again John! (or is Jake?).
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:25:00 PM

    Excellent Haiku Timothy. The imagery is also incredible. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem In Tears. Hugs, Gail

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And thank you for returning the favor!
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:41:00 AM

    Ah... the ephemeral qualities. Good work! Jack

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for checking out my haiku work. I feel as though it's an underrated form of poetry.
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:20:00 AM

    Thanks you two! :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:02:00 AM

    wow, I REALLY like this one , one of my favorite haiku I've seen today.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Well written haiku, Timothy. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)