Haiku 2 by Timothy Hicks

Rick Zablocki

Date: 5/21/2013 4:29:00 PM

Like this. Congratulations. Rick

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/21/2013 11:09:00 PM

Thank you Rick! :)

Date: 5/20/2013 8:46:00 PM

Wow Timothy...every time I read this I find a different meaning I could imagine! Sorry about the delayed congrats...its been a very stormy tornatic day in my neck of the world for two days

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/20/2013 9:41:00 PM

Sorry to hear that, Donna! There has been quite a bit of drama for me as well... trying to make time for the Soup, but it's not always easy!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/20/2013 5:14:00 PM

Thank you all for the congratulations below me (and any that might appear above this comment). This is one of my faves and I'm happy it did well in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2013 2:40:00 PM

passion splash!!! Congrats on the HM. I sure like this one.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/20/2013 11:52:00 AM

Well done Tim

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/20/2013 11:12:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win in the contest. Well done. AO

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/20/2013 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations Tim., very nice. Love T.

Alfred Vassallo

Date: 5/20/2013 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations:- Exccelent!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/11/2013 2:23:00 AM

Awww, very sweet!

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/11/2013 9:11:00 AM

Thanks again Dindy! YOU are very sweet, methinks :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2013 8:00:00 PM

Timothy, nice. Always,~ LINDA

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/10/2013 3:41:00 AM

I appreciate your input. Your images with the mother blowing bubbles wasn't what I imagined, but I think it's great to see different angles of the same piece.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/9/2013 6:13:00 PM

You arre very intuitive! I always wanted to be an elementary school teacher, at one time I did have a pre-school BUT the Flower Children poem was for a contest by a friend with a 4 year old girl learning the alphabet, so I did ok? YOU are correct in not naming your haiku, numbering them is best [though you can put the first line in the title space & that's Ok too!] now ..remember do not capitalize & that's a very nice haiku! Light & Love

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 6:51:00 PM

Aha I guess halfway right!... lol. I find titles for haiku somewhat distracting. They are so short that I feel the poem should speak for itself. Capitalizing haiku isn't "technically" correct, but I'm sort of OCD about capitalization... haha, maybe soon I can change my ways!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 3/9/2013 6:10:00 PM

Really great imaginary that you shared, thank you for your kindly visit before to my page :) and welcome to Poetry Soup, enjoyed my reading this morning :)

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 6:49:00 PM

'Twas a pleasure and how kind of you to also reply to one of mine! I haven't met one unkind person yet on this site!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/9/2013 5:35:00 PM

It's nice to see new faces here on the Soup Timothy, especially when they are as kind as you! Your Haiku is exquisite, so very nicely done! I really enjoyed reading it tonight, Great Work!!

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 5:53:00 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome! Haiku is one of my favorite forms to write in...

John Posey

Date: 3/9/2013 2:02:00 PM

really creative..... Jake

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 2:21:00 PM

Thanks again John! (or is Jake?).

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 3/9/2013 1:25:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Timothy. The imagery is also incredible. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem In Tears. Hugs, Gail

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 1:27:00 PM

And thank you for returning the favor!

Jack Jordan

Date: 3/9/2013 11:41:00 AM

Ah... the ephemeral qualities. Good work! Jack

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/9/2013 11:45:00 AM

Thanks for checking out my haiku work. I feel as though it's an underrated form of poetry.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2013 11:20:00 AM

Thanks you two! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2013 11:02:00 AM

wow, I REALLY like this one , one of my favorite haiku I've seen today.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2013 10:41:00 AM

Well written haiku, Timothy. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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