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Mustered Clouds

Morning stretch of light,
Clouds sliced by blades of pearled rays:
Sallow beginnings.

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:05:00 AM

    gosh, you must be posting stored up poems you have been writing. they are all much too good to have been written in one day. Or were they??

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/15/2013 2:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    They are all new
  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:23:00 AM

    Just beautiful...I ve read your other haiku too..I ll be back to comment later..Duty calls : )

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/15/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charmaine
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:33:00 PM

    It's a beautiful sight to see... those blades of light through the clouds. What a way to start the day methinks. Keep up the good work!

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/15/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's always a glorious sight to see, thanks!
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:39:00 AM

    I like this one very much Raul you paint a good picture here xx

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/15/2013 3:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mandy