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Parallel Lines

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Parallel Lines

I am lost, and broken,

trapped alone,
in a foggy crevasse,

wedged between sanity | madness | anguish.


I lose, and break,

memories taunting,
my waking thoughts,

stripping me bare | naked | exposed.


I survive, barely breathing,

slipping deeper,
into nothingness,

feeling little | shattered | numb.

I am incomplete, without you,

broken and fatigued,

gnawed by emptiness | desolation | pain.


I persist, each breath futile,

crushed, yet alive,
comforted knowing only,

that you breathe | you live | and you love.



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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Wow, awesome emotions Scribbler. All captured together, makes it so intense!

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    Date: 3/9/2013 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Rienie! I am more touched that my scribble touched you... have a peaceful, warm, kind day :-)
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:56:00 PM
    You write beautifully...keep the ink flowing.

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    Date: 3/9/2013 4:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for such warm and kind words, Christine! I deeply appreciate the sentiment ... Have a peaceful, gentle, and kind weekend