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Please forgive me

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Please forgive me

I've never felt this way???
Not one single day!
This feeling is ripping me apart;
Am I breaking my own heart?
Harsh words written....
I only know I'm smitten!
My love, am I losing you?
All I do is make you blue!
I really do apologize,
go ahead, you can criticize!
I really didn't want to make you mad;
We both end up being sad!
For what I have done, I say sorry!
I really didn't mean to make you worry.
Please forgive me?
Never just let me be...
I don't ever want to lose you;
Because I really do love you!
If you leave me I will die,
and my heart will never stop to cry!

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Wow, I can feel the emotion of saying your sorry all over this poem. You expressed it very excellently. Have a great weekend. Luv, Gail

    Venter Avatar Rienie Venter Date: 3/31/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Gail, thanks for reading my poem and the compliment. Hope your weekend is going well. Enjoy!