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  1. Date: 12/17/2013 4:29:00 PM
    If the trees keep back the desert , if the hungry farmer knew, would he let a sapling live its life, from Brisbane to Barcoo... NOPE-:{{

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 5:12:00 PM
    When our lives end the world ends and what was becomes irrelevant. We build, we destroy. That seems to be the pattern. It is written in the hearts of men and hardwired into our subconscious which as you say is Invisible. Rain forests notwithstanding, Allan

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:08:00 PM
    nicely written David,,,,, makes your heart sad, Calif has been on fire about two weeks now. The movie Fern Gully is on this subject .

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:55:00 AM
    vid just catching up with the soup liked this very thought provoking write, hoppe you atre ok my friend, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:53:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, David, very thoughtful style, now I need to redo my thinking, love the topic

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Interesting work about a good topic and interesting format..Sara

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:00:00 AM
    Brilliant... Love it~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Alas the truth does not wake human beings. We move closer to the tipping point everyday. Big bucks have been in total control of our lives for decades. Rock On David ; You are a good person and I know you will fight the good fight!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:22:00 AM
    DEEP..deep ..thank you Dave :-)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:05:00 AM
    Brilliant and articulately expressed David, Man's avariciousness rapidly leading to Man's demise.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Profound thoughts and very in tuned with the world. From the beginning to end I could picture it all. It saddens me a bit to imagine beautiful old trees being chopped down, but it is the world we live in... you bring up some good points. Wonderful write. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:58:00 PM
    Wonderfully thought out, David ..... and fits the form so well. I may have a try at this contest but you need a strong mastery of words to pull this off. Kudos, SuZ

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:29:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:33:00 AM
    I am finding that my attempt at this form, is just a bit too choppy. I think perhaps I shall try to employ simpler words, hoping to smooth it out a bit. Very challenging, is this one, David. Fun, though! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:53:00 AM
    wow, this is explicit and explosive,, and yes needed to be written.......

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:22:00 PM
    This was a hard one, trying my best but difficult to master

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:34:00 PM
    - A very well written poem David !!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:37:00 AM
    impressive, i'm gonna check it lol xx

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:52:00 PM
    That's great David...I thought con vow was hard but this is another level of hard with the AEIOU's in order. Im workin' on one though.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Wow David i am impressed...Seren