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Invisible Rainforests


       Ancient trees ejaculating seeds; immersing life over the undergrowth. They adorn fields, enveloping lands. Indigenous people offer prayers ushering chants asking for eternal life. In search of some understanding why areas- vast evergreens- disappear  in place of just using valuable assets through easy cheap irrigation, leaves one to underestimate the abominable rationale, extinguishing trees intentionally to overgraze lands using harsh agriculture, (damaging environmental life). It will only be universal disaster. 
       A New Earth project is just one plan uniting workers and taking each person’s intention to opt from using chainsaws, (altering those extreme measures) instigating more often kinder use to agriculture. Deforestation eventually will in time obliterate the underlying fact: among the evolution to insects that often do use these ancient trees, (every time illegal loggers obsessively  continually use chainsaws) another day ekes from it’s life. 
        Our world universally sustains all life endeavouring to implicate, pushing others, then us, to abandon this extinction, this insipid, puerile, often very ugly life. As people eliminate forests, (intimidating the obvious last user) they answer to everyone - Just Ignoring questions of relevance, uttering rubbish, abusing, silencing every corporate intellectual but offering no ultimatum without acknowledging  the eventual demise, infinitely makes our planet unliveable…      


 © 5/3/2013

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Wonderful poem, David, very thoughtful style, now I need to redo my thinking, love the topic

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 5:45:00 AM

    Interesting work about a good topic and interesting format..Sara

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:00:00 AM

    Brilliant... Love it~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Alas the truth does not wake human beings. We move closer to the tipping point everyday. Big bucks have been in total control of our lives for decades. Rock On David ; You are a good person and I know you will fight the good fight!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:22:00 AM

    DEEP..deep ..thank you Dave :-)

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:05:00 AM

    Brilliant and articulately expressed David, Man's avariciousness rapidly leading to Man's demise.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:32:00 PM

    Profound thoughts and very in tuned with the world. From the beginning to end I could picture it all. It saddens me a bit to imagine beautiful old trees being chopped down, but it is the world we live in... you bring up some good points. Wonderful write. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Wonderfully thought out, David ..... and fits the form so well. I may have a try at this contest but you need a strong mastery of words to pull this off. Kudos, SuZ

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Powerful!!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:33:00 AM

    I am finding that my attempt at this form, is just a bit too choppy. I think perhaps I shall try to employ simpler words, hoping to smooth it out a bit. Very challenging, is this one, David. Fun, though! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:21:00 AM

    This is an amazing piece of writing, even it weren't in a difficult form. It still blows me away how you were able to do this. :) I've been trying, but it's just, gosh... to me almost impossible.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:53:00 AM

    wow, this is explicit and explosive,, and yes needed to be written.......

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 8:22:00 PM

    This was a hard one, trying my best but difficult to master

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:34:00 PM

    - A very well written poem David !!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:37:00 AM

    impressive, i'm gonna check it lol xx

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:52:00 PM

    That's great David...I thought con vow was hard but this is another level of hard with the AEIOU's in order. Im workin' on one though.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Wow David i am impressed...Seren

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:42:00 PM

    wonderful write, David and some very valid points - congrats on your wins too, my friend

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 5:34:00 PM

    An intricate poem David, you are an interesting writer to say the least, I think mine eyes just had a feast, great!xxx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:27:00 AM

    THANK YOU DAVID FOR THE COMMENT ;-) ;-) I read this poem last night,, in hopes that i would understand your new contest..I want to give it a try, but we both know, i'm only good when it comes to writing crazy and weird poems... still i will try one, by next Friday, if i have time to think...lol... anyways, you are sweet and charming and a good poet friend... thank you always~ the big Tex in the sky

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Not even trying this one. Thanks for your comments and support.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:54:00 AM

    David your Von/Con style is fabulous. Excellency. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:37:00 AM

    oh my David must get my thinking cap on will try but !!!! Seren

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:25:00 AM

    Excellent. Thoughtful write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:42:00 AM

    Definitely a brilliant write! ...sad fact caused by mankind.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:21:00 AM

    It's a great tragedy. You write about it so eloquently, David.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:15:00 PM

    I love your poems David..very deep thoughts in a unique style

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:01:00 PM

    Oooooo!!! A Vow/Con!!!lol...Well Done!! Well done indeed!! Love you. Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:19:00 PM

    great write David...

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:50:00 PM

    A great write from you David!Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.

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