Dare to Dream by Debra Squyres

Dare to Dream

Dare to Dream Bottled dreams Under lock and key Whispers on wings We seldom see Reality loosened On sleeping shores Wave upon wave Inviting more Memories mixed With fantasy lore Enticing visuals To dare explore Ride the tides To foreign sands An open mind Urged to expand Bottled dreams Turn the key Open thoughts Set them free All Rights Reserved : 3/8/13


Bonchance Longfall Date: 3/27/2013 6:40:00 PM Wonderful write on dreams. It's good to read you again. I like how some are kept close under lock and key. I think our minds are most open in dreams. Well done.
robert johnson Date: 3/26/2013 3:30:00 PM Hello Debra, so glad you stopped. I was short last time on this sweet rhyme. It really deserves better. But that being said, I think I'll stop. For crying out loud, this ain't a letter. :)
Anne Rutherford Date: 3/22/2013 7:52:00 AM Wonderful poetry Debra ,It flows so well. A great read. xx Anne
Isaiah Zerbst Date: 3/12/2013 12:44:00 PM This is a unique and well written poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
robert johnson Date: 3/11/2013 3:14:00 PM Short on time. Dream on. :)
Bonchance Longfall Date: 3/10/2013 10:28:00 AM Love the poem! It flows so smoothly. :)
elizabeth wesley Date: 3/9/2013 8:51:00 PM A treasure to read, it has so many facets that shine and make this poem special Deb, you talent glows in this lovely vers. Lizzy
Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/9/2013 2:37:00 PM Ooh! Debra I loved your delightful poem. It flowed wonderfully, not a stumble, like a song. Warm Smiles, Connie
Owen Yeates Date: 3/9/2013 1:52:00 AM Hi Debra lovely words really enjoyed reading this, all the best Owen
Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2013 1:32:00 AM it's very interesting how you did the very short lines. It made it read quickly and I really liked this!
Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/8/2013 1:30:00 PM We spend a lot of our life pleasing others only to forget about ourselves in the process. Our dreams get locked away while we focus on others. Nicely written. love phyl
Sara Kendrick Date: 3/8/2013 12:37:00 PM Great work..If we all could just turn the key to open the door to let out our dreams..Enjoyed reading this great work today..Thanks for stopping by.. Sara
Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/8/2013 11:44:00 AM Debra; this is really good. I think that's what I need to do. All my life I spend trying to please other people. Now I'm going to try to please myself. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Lucilla
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2013 11:28:00 AM I've been on a week's holiday in Turkey, there is the internet very bad - has not been reading much poetry. - (But when I have vacation I would do other things) - Today I'm back home and have time to read your lovely poetry Debra. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
jack horne Date: 3/8/2013 9:33:00 AM love this, Debra - congrats on your wins too : )
Russell Sivey Date: 3/8/2013 8:36:00 AM This is a brilliant and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this immensely wondrous poem this morning! What an amazing piece, you have brought such life into these short lines, very nicely done, Great Work!!

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