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Shadows

Lost and alone.  
In the land of shadows. 
Blue skies coming thru. 
I hint about it at times. 
Though never really say it.
I wonder, do they know?
Can they tell by my words?
Or by my silence in place.
I've turned my other  cheek.
As I pretend it never happened.
All those barbecues in days past.
I wonder if anyone really knew ?




 jan , 15th 2013  Tues

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  1. Date: 4/20/2014 6:19:00 AM
    Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, debbie

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:53:00 PM
    You left us hanging as to what happened. Now you need to let us know. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:22:00 AM
    I too want to know what happened.....intriguing.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:27:00 AM
    It touches the passions of sadness

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 12:14:00 AM
    hey, where is the new post you mentioned?? I am waiting for it!!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:58:00 PM
    This one makes me wonder what has happened. It seems sad. Very interesting, Debbie.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:33:00 PM
    Sad and deep emotions Debbie, I've been to many events were shadows are cast, I wonder if you felt out of place? always! LINDA

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:12:00 AM
    I relate, sadly. So many never know what others endure. Thought provoking poem here.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:15:00 AM
    It's funny that you commented on "ouch". Your work here is about turning the other cheek. Mr. Kahn and others in positions of power (on the other hand) need to exercise a lot more restraint. I always say--beware of the bulldozer, t-rex, and previously caged escaped rhino type of individuals. These are people I try to avoid when possible. Unfortunately, it's not always possible. and they intrude into our lives. Then a different strategy is in order.

    Beaufort Avatar Duke Beaufort
    Date: 3/13/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant "the power of money" sorry about that. I can't think straight that early in the AM!
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:29:00 AM
    This poem gives the reader lots to think about. I like it, well done! Keep writing.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:19:00 AM
    I think it is and was their loss. They missed out on the reflections of a gem. Hey, I just stopped by to say hi. Keep up the inner peace and thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 3:25:00 AM
    Definitely one to ponder on, Debbie. Wonder how well any of us ever know anyone else. Or they us. - Red

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:16:00 AM
    Debbie, a deep poem. - Came out in the sun, the shadows are cold, dark and lonely. - Hope you are doing fine my friend. - Have a lovely day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Hopefully not fried green tomatoes. Definately cooked up some emotions. Well done Debbie.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Well you have my thoughts cooking in this emotion sizzler Debbie, its always good to hear from you, hope the blue skies to come hold a blessing for you.."

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 5:18:00 PM
    Are we talking fried green tomatoes here deb? Haha..whatever the blues...I know you are not expected to keep turning the other cheek!...always..Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 3/10/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know how you feel..pretending all the time around people who think everything is OK, they can't see you are not OK....prayers to you dearest...
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:19:00 PM
    So sad.... Brings out the caring side of Jake. I hope you know, on PS there is ample love for you to overcome anything that saddens you... Love you Darlin'..... Jake

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:36:00 AM
    This is a stunning write, my darling. Well done :) xo

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:00:00 PM
    and life toodles by , memory dont lie, whatever else can i do:)

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:42:00 AM
    You 'wonder if anyone really knew'... I often wonder if anyone really cares... Very nice poem (though sad)... Terry (thanks for your kind words... hmmm, blue, green ... you might like another earilier poem 'While I gaze in your eyes'...)

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