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Woven Landscapes

The strewn spider webs,
Thread the needles of the pines:
Tapestry of trees.

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:07:00 AM

    Love it. I think almost every one I saw tonight was gorgeous! Goodnight now

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/15/2013 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 2:41:00 AM

    Nicely done, Raul.

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/9/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:21:00 AM

    An ah-ha moment in time..Enjoyed reading this one today..I have written one that I would like for you to read_"The Visit"....Sara

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/9/2013 3:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, for stopping by, 'The Visit' was profound.
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:36:00 AM

    I can see this woven lanscape so well Raul.It makes me wonder if where you live is close to forests ..You see nature with a beautiful eye

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 5:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No I don't, but I get lost in the imagination of one.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:04:00 PM

    Hullo, Raul. Great to see you posting on PS again :D ~ I enjoy the play on words that you incorporated so well into this haiku -- webs threading the needles into a tapestry. Very neat. Breathes some life into the haiku, animating the imagery.

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, it's always nice to post here, many great writers come and go from here.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:08:00 PM

    Nice imagery! Good one poet!

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by.