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FOREPLAY OF SHADOWS rated grownfolk bizness

 The shadows provocatively play upon the wall, a gift of candlelight
Playfully they dance from sounds of ecstasy, as if they hear
The melody in a flickering tongue followed by soft kisses and nibbles
Has decibels in their dimension
Look at him gently glide down her neck, as he massages her bosom
Pay close attention...you can see her nipple rise
The shadows hand plays with one, while the tongue challenges with thee other.
So one doesn't get jealous I alternate, getting closer to the doors of freedom
Her shadow sits up slowly, letting down her hair, and straddles my shadow
Attacking me with erotic kisses of want
She puts that part of her lady, on that part of my man and slow dance
The shadow kisses her chest and pulls her hair, as I insure her that bad girls do go to heaven
The moist on my man, can the shadows feel that?
We can't hear them, and they can't see us

So the shadow stands with her still straddled, and spins her one notch above sixty-eight
And takes out their aggression through taste-testing natural nectar...still in position
I walk to the bed and watch the shadow gently lay her down
Push her legs up,  and rest them upon shoulders
We watched shadows as I entered her doors of freedom
I see her shadow's foot curl, as I look into her soul with my eyes
In our reality

Scribe M. Linton 


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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:45:00 AM

    Your talent shines throughout this romantic piece.. well done my poetic brother....Michael

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:39:00 AM

    What a poem to be reading this afternoon. It is very romantic. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:48:00 AM

    in your shadow as a poet i stand, this is amazing poetry!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:03:00 AM

    OOOH! AWESOME!!! With the emphasis on the AWE! So 'BAD GIRLS' go to Heaven Eh? Hope my maker takes me home tomorrow...if 'Bad Boys' can come too!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 5:36:00 AM

    Damn fam!!!! What a morning read..I hadn't realized you posted...I would have held back my simple poem..lol great one here...excellent imagery!!!

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/8/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You know when they say...Oh My God; that's some spiritual shit lmao! Keep burning fam and Thanks for the continuous support!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 3/8/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love this line, " as I insure her that bad girls do go to heaven"
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:40:00 PM

    You really delivered the eroticism with this one, Dr. Linton Bradley. A lot of neat word-play -- impressive(so if "tuned-up" properly, bad girls really can go to heaven, eh? Ha! That's one of my fav lines in this poem).

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/8/2013 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol...yes sir. This how we get hair on our chest. The heaven thing is the climax part! : )
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 3/7/2013 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Even though I am not fully grown-up, it's ok that I read this, right? :D
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:17:00 PM

    an excellent sensual write Scribe....the shadow knows

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/8/2013 2:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph!
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:21:00 PM

    Very passionate and sensuous poem.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your inspiring words at my poem.

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/7/2013 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! It is appreciated!
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:59:00 PM

    There's an old saying I'd like to be a fly on the wall here or there..but your shadow sounds much better.....nice romantic side.....

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/7/2013 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:39:00 PM

    Scribe very erotic and tastefully done, I like it....David

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/7/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David...just being a naughty scribe!
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:19:00 PM

    Nicely done Marlon, I think I just got a shiver or something, very pleasurable write, I much enjoyed being a shadow on your wall, smile xxx

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 3/7/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : ) oh yeah good girls do go to heaven!