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Haiku 21

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Haiku 21

The hot breath of life
just this side of intimate.  
A dance of the soul. 

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 6:12:00 PM

    Nicely done...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/7/2013 9:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Donna... Jack
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:38:00 PM

    nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/7/2013 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the comment. I'll check out her poems. Thanks for the suggestion. Jack
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:59:00 PM

    this sizzles!!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/7/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Siiiiiizzzzzzz. Jack