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Then, was a lot less adversity
 Then, you just can't compare
 Then, was common courtesy 
 Then, people they did so care

 Then, there were less prudes
 Then, people got on together 
 Then, a different set of attitudes                                         
 Then, we'd never say never

Then, was more fashionable
Then, seemed more classic                                                                                            
Then, was more memorable                                                                            
Then, I think was just fantastic

Then, time's were more sleek                                                                              
Then, was just way more cool
Then, I would say was unique                                                                               
Then, though now is oldskool!



inspired me by my other writes a new age, world in my eyes 
conversations with other people family friends ext 
also other soup members and of course current issues
some could probably relate to also  WRITTEN 0CT 2012

FIRST HALF TALKING ABOUT NOW AND HOW THINGS WER
THEN REEDITED ABIT CHANGED VERSE TWO COMPLELY




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