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Preceding Dawn

A long kiss goodnight,
Atop the damp grains of sand:
By receded waves.

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:38:00 AM

    This is lovely Rauli

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku!

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:54:00 AM

    amazing, haiku..... nice and lovely when it comes in good health... LINDA

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Raul...exellent...David

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:20:00 PM

    Nice imagery, enjoyed it.

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/6/2013 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, glad you enjoyed!