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Pearl Diving

Breathe laden islands rise and fall beneath the lap
of crystalline water, a steam graced surface breached, 
rosettes crest, their gently risings peaks to cap
mouthfuls of desire whose lower gate's lie unbreached.

Submerged beneath chest's hollow lies a navel fine
the round perfection of its form longs, for pointed tongue.
A sweeter base can't be found 'bove the water line
yet, men would gladly drown to go below hips clung.

Below, down deep, nectar bathes the pristine pearl,
and petals, rose-red gently part in delight.
The heat, the steam the bath, and the lovely girl
perhaps, perhaps, he thinks, we'll make of this a night.
 


Date: 3/6/13

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Well done Debbie, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Wow, Debbie! A well-deserved 1st place win indeed! Thanks for your comment on my poem for your Metamorph contest - To answer your question, yes, it was a lot of fun! I love your contests - They're always original and challenging :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:57:00 PM

    Richard saying he is a man of the "sea" down here. Funny!!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:56:00 PM

    HOT poem, Debs. WEll done, and congrats.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:14:00 AM

    Congratulations o this Debbie loved it when i first read it and still do xx

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:14:00 PM

    Ooh la la, very sensual piece. I myself am a man of the sea. You are oh so talented.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:39:00 PM

    Congratulations on a fine piece of poetry and your win.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Debbie this is a gem. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:13:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Debbie, very lovely place and poem

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:28:00 PM

    A NICE ONE...DG... ALWAYS..PD

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Congratulations on this amazing beauty...Debbie...could you consider part 2?.....

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 3:11:00 PM

    Go ahead and add that couplet Debbie!! I can feel the sonnet encore!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:27:00 PM

    When I first read this, I knew it would take 1st place! Congratulations, Debbie!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Very sensual write, Debbie. :) Congrats on the big win

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Sensuality at it's best my dear, you are the pearl of poetry soup, congratulations for your amazing win love xxx

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/22/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think it wants to be a sonnet! hmmmm
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:50:00 PM

    Only you could write a sexy, sensual, and erotic poem.......and make it so beautifully innocent and pure...lovely lovely!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Too hot to handle for anyone but you Debbie, very nicely crafted---will you still love me tomorrow--LOL

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:59:00 PM

    Great images and metaphorical. A great write for the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:20:00 PM

    Superb Debbie! What metaphors in pearly pristine waters lie! Going in my favorites.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Wow!! The nectar, the pearl, and the petals are so enticing!! : ) Erotica through the refinement of your talented and nuanced words. Great write, Deborah! Craig will blush! : ) Best of luck in his contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:26:00 AM

    This is hot oh cool one , naughty but nice xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:22:00 PM

    wow ever so visual, wish i was there, love this...

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:01:00 AM

    Debbie a wonderful image and I love the metaphors...David

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:41:00 PM

    Gorgeous! Ummm... I just sent a soup mail, but I think it's okay? Something strange is going on... odd odd odd... xox Dee

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:02:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery!!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:00:00 PM

    Such a beautiful story...very enjoyable

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:37:00 PM

    nice write.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:16:00 PM

    so lovely sweet angel Debbie :) always enjoyed your great write :) luv and hugs :) SK

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Love it!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:36:00 PM

    This is quite beautiful my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, quite the special poem, Great Work!!