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Where Are You

Where Are You? Where are you my love - where are you? I searched for you, but did not find you. Where are you my love - where are you? Are you up in the sky, or in the still of the night? Are you in the rain, or in a morning's breeze, or have you just vanished like time? Where are you my love - where are you? I searched in the woods, I looked everywhere, but my love - you were not there. I look at the sky, when I see a bird fly and I wonder - could that be you, that just passed by. When I look at the stars and see one that shines so bright - I wonder, could that be you - giving me light. I can not see you, I can not feel you. I don't know where you have gone. Where are you my love - where are you?...
03/06/2013 Written by Lucilla m. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:47:00 PM

    Ok I mentioned it and couldn't resist. I had actually opened my poem with, Where are you, lol. I didn't even remember that part, I think that may have been a functional title, but I decided to call it lost souls, which is what I will put it under now. You will see what I mean. I know our poems don't represent the same thing, but yours did remind me of mine.

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:29:00 PM

    I have an old very unfinished poem, that has a very similar theme to this. I like this poem, but yours is much better for sure. I had written that before I even joined the soup, was trying to move more into free verse. I will probably be reading poems that have been here for a while, so sorry if some comments are a little belated.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:35:00 PM

    This is also very touching and hopeful. Great job!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:16:00 PM

    I wonder how many men and women have asked these same questions over time? Nicely written poem... I like the questions you asked in it. Enjoyed !

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:57:00 PM

    this is filled with such sweet longing, Leonora. Thanks for sharing this new poem with us all!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:46:00 PM

    Probably lost..as lost as you feel..very evocative!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:46:00 AM

    GORGEOUS!!! This is a keeper my dear Lucilla... bravo! Hugs from an old romantic codger... xox

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:00:00 PM

    LUCY, I hope you only meant your last poem as a comment... :-(, thank you for the lovely but sad poem. seems as if your longing a bit for the light... enjoyed~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:57:00 PM

    A lost love, not easily found has its sadness that leves one feeling so lost. You described it perfectly.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:15:00 PM

    Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments! May you have a very wonderful and blessed day! JP

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:48:00 PM

    Hi Lucilla, your poem was so delightful to read. I found this very deep and touched the reader's heart. Have a beautiful day luv. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:48:00 PM

    This is quite the touching write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a masterful piece Lucilla, quite the wondrous poem, Great Work!!