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The Flower

“A Flowers Wilt”	

Witness into the small existence 
That abides the beauty of-----------
Freelancers all around,
Just to get a good look.

A baneful abrasion, the flower took
It captivates you in-------------
Reeling you, and reeling you, 
until you pick the right flawless touch.

Dandelions swaying thin,
And here we fall like petals.
Ready to exploit, the beauty of----------
Inhale the fragrance,

Courtyard azure eyes, 
Embarking in a wishful eternity,
A crush they become, when the loveliness up and left. 
A bully against arrogant, thru feminine perfumed veils.
Tulips waiting for better auspicious’ sky.
Asters claim the eclipse's dinginess censors it from the brilliance of the sun. 
~
A lonely rose
In My Helix World-
The out-and-out are born.
Cries in the dimness, 
A sweet Lotus echo’ 
Slight yelps of agony, carried off by pollen breeze.
The earth revolves to fast,
It injects herbal essence into the wind.
For a split second, we feel the pixie dust.
Channel the essential, as it fades.
Earlier beauty, calmness-
A flourish smile,
Rusk of flower, a bluebird’s bread.

Like candles and dew they stream and limber energy. 
Opposing others of its humane, 
Against the command of its importance, 
Pierced by its own elegance,
Thriving slowly of its own will, 
A short while, gone astray!

The Flower wilts.
The gardener cries. 


By;PD


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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:42:00 PM

    Such a delicate supple piece here P D..' I see many good comments. Well done.'

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:54:00 PM

    People are like flowers to aren't they. All colors shapes and sizes. Some stronger than others but all in their own way beautiful ; And delicate in the end. It is all immortal and like everything else in nature we to will pass this way again. Best wishes always Dear Lady.

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:30:00 PM

    I read it again - loved it. You are beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:47:00 AM

    That was incredible! I was pulled in from the beginning, and left wanting more in the end. All beautiful things never last long, which is why we have to enjoy it while it's still there. Beautiful!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:24:00 PM

    such an amazing poem! i loved the ending!

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 11:16:00 AM

    PD, wonderful experiencing the rise and fall of a flower with you, very lovely.

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:06:00 AM

    Philosophical and beautiful. Unexpected word and meaning combinations made me approve all along. May I add it to my fav list? Yes. The flower will be well and loved and cherished. The flower will celebrate and dance in the wind forever. The gardener loves the flower. I know it :)

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 10:29:00 PM

    It's a beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 11:42:00 AM

    good morning.I rely on my faith for almost everything.went to the Dr. this morning.One of the meds they put me on has given me bad side effects and is making me sick.I have a kidney infection and pnemonia.I have been trying to tell my med nurse something was wrong because i didnt feel right.now i get to go through withdraws on top of it all.hope you have a great day.I am going to get some rest.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 9:23:00 PM

    Hi , Thank you for the complement, I read this of yours and it is beautiful , Glad you liked Buds of Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

    nice reflections, thank you for reading haiku 6, I like the honey dripping from tongue as well #3 ;}

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:51:00 PM

    I guess seeing him so beautiful and then next seeing the ashes, hard to explain but I think I sort of get why you had that feeling-- sorry, didn't mean to make you cry :'(....hugs to you... sorry have to go for now, have to prepare lunch... I'll be around...be strong, okidoki?

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:48:00 PM

    sorry haven't read this poem yet-- will comment on it another time, shucks, I am tearing up here, reading your last comment :'(... I can imagine you doing that, singing to him, oh shucks, Linda, my heart's just heavy for you-- I see that you seem to be fine (I mean with the comments you make) but yes, deep down, you are still hurting, very much so...when a pain is that deep, it takes a long time--that's beautiful how you wrote him a letter..I think I know why you felt that way with the cremation

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Excellent philosophy with which life can be compared beautifully. Genius poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Thanks for comments on poetry, enjoyed reading some of yours ~*LINDA~

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:23:00 AM

    Nice write my Mistress. I will visit later~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:34:00 PM

    the way you wrote this is how i feel when i was writing reflection I should have asked for your imput love it xx davidscott

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 11:02:00 AM

    What a sentimental fool (lol) you are. What a wonderful poem full of anxiety and emotion. Superb.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Hi Pd, thank you for always dropping in on my side even in my absence. Hope you are doing good and that the weekend has been an awesome one :) *hugs*

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 11:05:00 PM

    love feeling the pixidust and tasting the bluebird's bread....... keep the magic. Love' SuZ

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Delaicately and yet so powerfully designed! Amazing work once again. A very captivating verse. Don't know why I haven't been reading your poetry lately--it is quite stimulating to the mind. The gentle pedals of your work have eased my mind this evening. Thanks. :)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 4/4/2013 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always, Laura hehe
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:25:00 AM

    Hi Linda, very very deep and explicitive write you have here, a great visionary work, love Carl

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Precious heart... Very Beautiful write... this Puts me in mind.. ways of life.. as we just like a small flower in existence.. and just for a short time... Thank you for your Gracious com.. God Bless... ; Grace

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:43:00 AM

    Another example of why you are my Favorite POET.... luv n hugs and kiss on cheek...Michael

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:14:00 AM

    I say it's excellent from all the ways leaving no space. Thanks......, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 11:02:00 AM

    Linda, I have to agree with Roy below...a very deep and thoughtful poem whose fragrance was not meant to be consumed in just one breath:) I love the imagery and especially the ending. I'll be returning to your garden of poetry a little later but for now...duty calls. PS: THANKS for dropping in on me earlier - appreciate your kind thoughts///Terry

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:09:00 AM

    Pd..I ve read your poems for years..and they keep flourishing without dying.A beautiful poem and going tmfvs

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Knew it was grand.....congratulations Linda....Donna

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:00:00 AM

    Well, I'm going to have to come back and re-read this several times, I think. There's a lot to take in for a single read. For now, great win! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 6:48:00 PM

    Hello!Good morning my dearest sis Linda! How are u? Hope ur doing great! So glad there's an internet signal & was able to peek @ soup. I'm 16hrs. drive far from my place. We're in a school tour now & b4 leaving the hotel for another place,(tom. leave the country) I tried to peek here. My biggest HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS on your fantastic win! Cheers! So so happy 4 u! Thank you for making me win again in your contests too. I'll judge my contest when I'll b home this wkend. Biggest HUGS! 4ever, Leo

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