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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:56:00 PM
    A bitter sweet memory transformed into a winning write. Well done! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:24:00 PM
    Hello Craig, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:31:00 PM
    Congrats Craig on your win...... cheers

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:20:00 PM
    Oh how disheartening. Did this really happen? Anyway you have a great poem from it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Very nice, Craig. Quite a turn at the end. Great win!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:38:00 PM
    Congratulations in the contest Craig. A very nice an creative write this is. Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig ...guess you found out how the captain felt....great poem second time I read it.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:34:00 PM
    OMG that would be horrid, i would have cried! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:32:00 PM
    I remember reading this. A great poem. Congrats on your win Craig. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Enjoyed your poetry, it's well done congrats xxx

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Oh i used to make model ships, i would have been heartbroken too , congratulations Craig xx

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:21:00 AM
    OH OH!!........this made me think of my boys growing up, hours spent on their models..........and then while they were at school, their bored little sister discovering them while I wasn't watching! DISASTER!!! Every boy's (or Dad's heartbreak)....what a sad but cute theme for a poem!!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Oh NO!!!! I very much enjoyed this one, Craig...Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Oh Boy Craig is this for real,, all that time and effect wasted,, but not on the poem,, that is still intact and excellent poetry

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Ahhh!!! How disappointing that must have been!!!Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by. Your visit was uplifting..I hope that you have sunshine today..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:55:00 AM
    This reminds me of the many hours my boys spent assembling their models piece by piece........escaping to those adventures and to those places where little boys go after dinner. What a perfect subject for Susan's contest! loved it!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:07:00 PM
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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Oh very sad....good poem though...good luck...

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:39:00 PM
    wow, I love how you thought this up, like a re-enactment of the poor ships former demise! great creativity, Craig. If it were my contest, I would sure score this one high.

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    Date: 3/6/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Funny thing is Andrea, that the model going down the stairs is true! LOL--though I must say it was far from an LOL when it happened!
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Wonderfully written Craig. The end of HMS Bounty Ships. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie