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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 3:48:00 PM

    David , captivating emotional and very well written . Those of us that have lost the love of our life feel every line here.Superb poem ! Anne

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 3:38:00 AM

    Whatever I say won't be adequate to describe the beauty of what you have written and the sadness with which it has touched my heart. I live with this constant fear of losing...I lost my mother to MS after years of watching her deteriorate and now...the constant nagging fear...who's next. The first part rings true....make the most of every day and opportunity. Going to my favorites! I feel with you! Glad the memories can help you survive!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:00:00 AM

    Tissues in hand as I wipe tears from eyes. David this is truely a poem that can only come from one who has experienced loss. Its going to be amongst the most heartfelt poem I have ever read. Hugs Shaz

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:12:00 PM

    And wonderful and heartfelt write. Rick

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:40:00 AM

    A celebration of loss, healing in itself. Shared in a beautiful way, thank you David

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:31:00 PM

    That brought tears to my eyes....truly beautiful. I want to find someone to love this much....but then losing them is all the much harder.

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 4:10:00 PM

    yes heartfelt emotion flows, and goosebumps fill the night... very good picture of loniless mate! from one who has been there...

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 5:02:00 PM

    wonderful heartfelt write, amazingly brought together to bring comfort in those times,

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Beautiful, sadly beautiful, David... Terry

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:51:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL write David! it touched my heart. I lost my wife and soulmate 9 months ago and I struggle everyday with missing us, and the lonliness. I've been writing since her loss and its a blessing. I wish you some peace in your world that has turned upside down. blessings, Bernard

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:07:00 AM

    this is sadly graceful. A poignant writing, David. :)

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:38:00 AM

    Hauntingly beautiful.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 5:37:00 PM

    This is really good. It hits very close to home. Since my husband passed away - things are not the same. I wrote a poem ( After You Who? ) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Lucilla

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/9/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla...I am saddened by your loss. I hope you have found comfort {{{Hugs}}}. Love..Ruby xx
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 2:04:00 AM

    Hi David and this is so special going in my favs, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:56:00 PM

    You are the 'Master Poet' David. You stir so much with your words as if each one is alive and touchable...*tear...another fav for me. Well Done!!! Love you Cap'n deb

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:07:00 PM

    These words are so universal and heartfelt. A wonderful read.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:20:00 PM

    a beautiful heartfelt poem, David, and with wonderful advice, truly very touching and a joy to read...

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:12:00 PM

    A very touching and a part of life poetry .... David! - Sending you a S-MAIL! - Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:35:00 AM

    Full of sorrow. Expression touches the heart. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:51:00 AM

    There are so many of us that could take this as our own David and that makes you an exceptional writer xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:08:00 AM

    This feels so painful and so real...yet it ends in a consoling way.Loss brings such.sorrow but knowing the soul lives forever it brings much misted my.eyes.Going tmfvs

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:26:00 AM

    David...I hope and pray that this beauty of a poem is not from true-life experience...If it is I can truely identify...In my humble opinion I think this is your best work so far - Tim

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:16:00 AM

    How blessed us mortals are for being able to love again! Excellent David! Excellent!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 2:56:00 AM

    thanks alot i appericiate alot yu guys help to bring me up...thnks alot dear....this piece here uv written is kind of relating to us...thumbs up

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:29:00 PM

    David an exceptional write. Emotions of loss is conveyed courageously and heartfelt. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:16:00 PM

    absolutely beautiful. You are one poet from whom I have seen very obvious growth in your work. It has become more and more mature. This past year.WOW.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:47:00 PM

    Wow.....this is a deeply emotional write that many may be able to connect with and feel less alone. Beautiful !

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Some will experience the emotion described so eloquently here but will never match your creative and poignant accounting of feelings. A satisfying sadness is detected here. Tough to describe with such an oxymoronic phrase.... but that's what I feel after reading your beautiful post..... deepest respect..... Jake

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:33:00 AM

    David, this poem is by far Priceless. Left me breathless at the way your words described a heart's feeling beyond words. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:24:00 AM

    WOW... Sometimes there are no words and this is one of those sometimes....