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NOW I AM CONFUSED

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NOW I AM CONFUSED

                                                     Wish you my love                                                        
                                                  with a deep red Rose
                                                         as a symbol 
                                                     I know you love it
                                                    
                                                I remember you threw up
                                               when the Rose became dry
                                              to day I see dark in day's Sun
                                                    now I am confused

                                                     

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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 7:43:00 PM

    confusion amongst us leaves us in dismay, such a good write, enjoyed, always, p.d.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:10:00 AM

    bl good write, I like it...David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:24:00 PM

    I can't imagine you confused but if you are I can help. Write one now about how clearly you see things. That's what you do best! :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 3/8/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My friend, I just try.