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Circle

My father painted
western landscapes and bluebonnets
in a manner that can be described as “primitive.” 
He painted with his heart to stay sane 
in the never-sane world 
of the mens’ tubercular sanitarium.
From what little I actually know of him
he was a man of conscience 
and strength 
and love for his family.
He may have been other things too, 
but I can’t possibly know for certain 
except from the stories I’ve been told.
In these stories he was almost a saint.

When I was twelve he was sent home to die,
although no one told me. 
I remember him lying in bed in our front room. 
I touched his puffy leg, leaving a white dimple.
We laughed. 
He said we would make plans for time together,
just the family,
when he was better. 

One anonymous night 
I stayed with my grandmother 
for no reason I could figure out, 
although I really didn’t give it much thought. 
In the darkest part of that night 
my mother woke me 
to tell me he was dead. 
I don’t remember my reaction,
but I don’t think I cried. 
Men didn’t do that, you see. 
I do remember eating cake after his funeral 
at what I recently heard called 
a “funeral party.” 

I have a way of forgetting painful times.
For a long time after his death
my memory is a blank. 

Now, I am a painter. 
I don’t paint his landscapes or bluebonnets, 
but, like my father, 
it brings a breath of sanity to my world, 
completing the long-delayed circle of his life.

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:55:00 PM

    I really enjoy getting further glimpses of your father and what he meant to you... the honesty of writing, the lack of sugarcoating, all make it worth-while reading. Though you may not have known him very well in the flesh he is still with you in your habits (maybe without you even realizing it). It's really amazing to me, those invisible threads that bind us together... wonderful writing... keep it up!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/9/2013 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're a very perceptive and sensitive person. I truly appreciate your comments and reading . Jack
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:55:00 PM

    This is a heartfelt touching write Jack. A lovely tribute to your father. Blessings Donna

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/6/2013 9:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. He was a good man, and much loved. Jack
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:25:00 AM

    This has brought tears to my eyes this morning.... what a touching poem you've penned.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/6/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Becca. It's odd to me how easy it is to write some pieces, such as this one, and so hard to write others. Jack