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between sleep and consciousness

I swear I heard you when I woke
lying next to me, breathing deeply
I thought I felt your presence
as I floated in the fog 
between sleep and consciousness 
You moved closer and gently touched my back
Your fingers felt warm on my cold skin
Your breath on the back of my neck
sent shivers down to my toes 
I turned over to meet you
My hand reached for you in the dark
but you had gone

3/6/13

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Steamy! Favin it!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Perfection of thought, hope, sensation, and love.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:25:00 PM

    This is a great write but it left me hanging for more as if it needed more at the end.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 12:20:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your very expressive and emotive work..The dream of all dreams..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:21:00 AM

    See my response to your comment on Eileen's Message to the lover of a poet. Just so you realize not all of us look at women in this way. Hugs Rick

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Got it and responded :) you're so sweet :D
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 7:58:00 AM

    I'm here today...to be close to your lovely, beautiful Enchanting Poetry...hoping somehow , maybe....I can feel you touch me...in every way...I dream of

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mr H... behave yourself, young man :P
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:35:00 AM

    How sad, I hope he came back to bed.

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    he will, this weekend ;)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:56:00 PM

    nicely penned Becca...thanks for stopping by...hugs

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:39:00 PM

    Wow Becca, worth every second i'm here to read poetry as good as this..

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Harry!! good to see you
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:52:00 PM

    oh, my, Becca, this was stunning! What made you write one like this?

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/7/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, you're so adorable :)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:20:00 AM

    love this made nice feeling a gain good emotion thanks for coments on mine you have soup xx davidscott

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:22:00 AM

    Again, one full of passion, enjoyed reading:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:05:00 AM

    Lovely Becca, and so is the poem lol, very very nice indeed. Regards Richard

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Richard! :)
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:52:00 AM

    This is truly a phenomenal and incredible write my friend! I truly loved reading this wonderful poem this afternoon! You have impacted me greatly by the splendor of this romantic piece, such a glorious poem Becca! I am enthralled by the masterful write you have pleasantly written, I enjoyed reading this amazing poem! Great Work!!

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Russell !
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:59:00 AM

    Another of your very personal pieces. I admire the self-revelation. Very nice work. Jack

    Lucas Avatar Becca Lucas Date: 3/8/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) thank you Jack