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Nature's Tears

From morning showers,
Liquid tension falls to earth:
Raining sustenance.

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  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:37:00 PM

    I like the contrasting connotations of "tension" and "sustenance". Great work!

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/14/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:40:00 AM

    Is this a repost?or am i mistaken?Lovely..

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/8/2013 4:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wrote it a few days ago
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 2:55:00 PM

    Nice Raul, beautiful words. BG

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno Date: 3/6/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, BG...hope all is well.