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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 7:38:00 AM
    touching... congrats on ur win

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Very touching and thought provoking piece.Congrats on your well deserved win..Thanks for sharing this piece...

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 11:47:00 AM
    A touching and sad poem... Congrats on the win and for bringing it to light.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 5:32:00 AM
    So so touching! Congrats on your win!

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Wow! Cyndi, a powerful poem, even without the footnote. Such harsh realities. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Catie and I were talking of categories of verses and forms, I love a good rant and I'd say this falls into stream of conciousness another sub category of free verse, my thoughts on this type of verse when i do them or anyone else, do they stand alone? Does this work without the footnote? Congrad's on your win a BIG fan. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Very intense write Cyndi, your poetry always carries weight, congrats on your 1st place win, love xxx

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Cyndi, may people like you give the mentally ill hope that change will come, that tragedy like Ashley's will no longer happen. This poem took my breath away.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:14:00 PM
    I bow down to you! other words!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Oh, Cyndi! Your poem just tore my heart out! You have taken a very gruesome event which showcases man's heartlessness, and you've turned it into a beautiful tribute to Ashley. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win in my free verse contest. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Another tough topic you have chosen to write about, Cyndi. I remember the resulting inquiry. I didn't realize that Ashley Smith was moved 17 times between 8 facilities in 9 months. A very well-written poem -- strong effect with continuing sentences from one stanza to the next(wot is that device of formatting officially called?).

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    Date: 3/10/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    enjambment? chris..maybe?
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Amazingly poignant write--I hope you send this to the newspaper --It's hard to believe this still happens--I thought this was for old movies--you've put this in a very powerful form--I pray she is at peace!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
    I love-love this poem, Cyndi! Thanks for the footnote; Im going to google her story. You must consider adding her name to the title. If this poem is for Catie's contest...I have no chances! : ) Have agreat day. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:35:00 AM
    Amazing work.