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Shattered Pieces

Shattered Pieces Shattered pieces are all that remain Of a love that brought so much pain Still they reflect all the scars not blind In mirrored images left behind Sharp they are like thorns from a rose Making one bleed when they are exposed Impressions of deceit and lies In shattered pieces left undisguised Tears that tried to drown in the rain Still show a reflection of deep inner pain Pieces left to bleed having been touched by the thorn That left a woman forever scorned…
Contest: Pieces Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Gail, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Nicely done Gail. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:56:00 PM

    Great job Gail congratulations

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Glad to share the spot with you Gail. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Congratulations Gail on your win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:12:00 AM

    love the way you have engineered this one together , a master piece love it , congratulations Gail xx

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:35:00 AM

    congrats on a fine win Gail

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:29:00 AM

    This seems like lyrics to a sad song......beautifully written! Congratulatons, Gail!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 8:45:00 AM

    Wonderfully written, love can be so painful! Congrats Gail!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:59:00 AM

    How can love be so fragile when two are involved and pledged to be there forever? Sometimes forever is not very long as the pain in your poems describes.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:33:00 PM

    I love this, awesome, I have written a few in this order, Life after love is one of them one. thank you for reading my fake haiku six,, going to fav's ;} have a great day.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 12:15:00 PM

    This write is forever beautiful my friend! It paints the perfect picture of turmoil within ones soul! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What the gorgeous piece, Great Work!!