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HATE AND LOVE

 HATE AND LOVE


	
HATE,
A heavy,
Huge and
Worthless load
That some chose to
Carry throughout life,
WITHOUT REALIZING HOW
Easier would things
Have really Been
Had they chosen
A lighter pack
Than that:
LOVE!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
05 March 2013


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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:34:00 PM

    What a beautifully balanced poem, so artfully done with the emotion at each end and the dividing line. It has so much meaning for anyone.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:46:00 AM

    Hate and love. I agree with Eileen. Can I send this to my brother. He is a Reverand? Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:27:00 AM

    Amazing! Absolutely amazing! This is a lovely one to use for a church meeting! :) God bless, my dear!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/5/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Such an honor I would never expect! It humbles me beyond measure! My words to be heard at Lord's church? On the other hand HE is the one who inspires us all, as St Paul says to the Corinthians! Thank you!
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:18:00 AM

    This is so very beautiful, and one truthful write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, quite the remarkable piece, Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/5/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell, you are a gentleman and a poet!