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I Will Never Leave You

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I Will Never Leave You

I will never leave you is the promise
I've made and if I ever fail you
I will take that hurt to my grave.
what a pleasure its been to have
known you my passion for you
is great.

I met you when I was at my lowest 
and my love for grows fonder each day.
You give me comfort in distance that is 
great in you is my wholeness; in you is 
my strength.

You are beauty unequaled before my eyes
the light in them that shines bright .
you are gentle so loving so kind you give 
me peace that I never knew I could mine
I call you " My heaven my sky" because
it's beauty is vast and its the fairest
comparison I can find..... no one will
ever love you the way I do.

I'm so grateful for you by my side
I will never leave you is a not an empty
promise but something that will reveal itself
in time. Id be foolish to ever leave you I wanna
love you for the rest of my life.

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 12:31:00 PM

    Boy, it's really going to hurt when you guys have a fight. It'll bring you two closer together if you can get through it, but such energy and love does have its consequences. Again I can feel the power.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:25:00 PM

    Nicely done poet

    Barton Avatar Madelin Barton Date: 3/7/2013 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sean I'm very happy to c the well received responses I get....I know my shortcomings but I love to write I'm not an avid poet more like a novice so I do the best I can and also I think too much so I give it a go and see where it takes me I really appreciate the feedback Sean- Sincerely Maddie