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  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Yasmin this is great..congratulations on your great win...Donna

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:41:00 AM
    A nice winning poem Yasmin... xox..pd

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Congrats on the win. Your poem definitely got off on the right foot!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:44:00 AM
    Agony of Da Feets! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:43:00 PM
    This is perfect. I enjoyed each of the lines. Congrats~A.O

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 12:51:00 PM
    Beautifully written....Congrats on your well deserved win,Jasmin...Great work...

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Congratulations to sweet Yasmin the Jasmine!...Funny stuff my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:36:00 AM
    A great winner. Congratulations on your big no. 1. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Hooray for you, Yasmin!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your super win my dear friend Yasmin! I'm so delighted to read your awesome winning piece tonight. Cheers and thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Congrats on oyu top spot Yasmin love well done , squealing shoes wow xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:32:00 AM
    Congrats Yasmin, such a wonderful Grook. Rick

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Love it! Great poetic idea - very concrete image. I know those sneakers! This is a new form for me to learn.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:11:00 AM
    No high heels for me ..... love to go barefoot! - Nice shoes talk, Yasmin. - Hope you are doing fine my friend. - Have a lovely day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:14:00 PM
    this is really quite cute. And how you ended it especially. I just had to see your grook. Hope I can get inspired to do one of these!

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    Date: 4/8/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And now you're inspired and got it all the way. That's my lady~A.O
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:11:00 AM
    Lol, Yasmin. I could imagine the shoes screaming. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:59:00 AM
    This is a fabulous Grook my friend, I really enjoyed this masterful write this morning! What a delightful piece, one of splendor Yasmin! You can sure bring love to anything you write about, even shoes! What a spectacular poem, Great Work!!