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Black Jack

Black Jack dealers
Counting money
Dealing the cards
Effortlessly,
Taking all my money!!!!

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:00:00 AM

    I've never been to a casino, but I heard roulette was quite fun! My advice is to only take a little bit of cash with you to the casino... funny piece! Speaks of gambling addiction quite 'effortlessly'!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:23:00 PM

    Right on the money, I can share this experience.

    Essence Avatar Gypsyof Essence Date: 3/13/2013 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol this was fun to write glad you liked it!! :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 9:00:00 PM

    I bought a lottery ticket once and got mad when I didn't win so it's best I don't get into cards. I love the "effortlessly" part, it says sooo much!

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 9:00:00 PM

    I bought a lottery ticket once and got mad when I didn't win so it's best I don't get into cards. I love the "effortlessly" part, it says sooo much!

    Essence Avatar Gypsyof Essence Date: 3/13/2013 4:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh yeah, lol they do take my money effortlessly lol thanks for stopping by :D
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:04:00 AM

    ............... ‡ Stopping Back By To Catch But Another Glimpse Of Pure Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Gypsy Queen! ˜ To Wish Her Loveliness The Most Magnificent In Glorious Days ˜ Fragrance, Be The Splendour As Radiant, 'Her Beauty.' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:13:00 PM

    Nicely done...and been there done that!

    Essence Avatar Gypsyof Essence Date: 3/13/2013 4:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ;D yeah me too lol
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:16:00 AM

    ............... ‡ Ps., May I Say, How Very Beautiful 'Your Beauty' Looks Today. *

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:08:00 AM

    ‡ Your Beauty, Should Learn How To Count Cards, Sweet Beautiful Gypsy Queen! ˜ Gambling Is Just Another Proven In Profits Statistic Of How To Reap From These Frailties Amid Humanity And If It Were Not It Would Not Be ˜ We Live In A World Where Governments Balance Budgets And Fill Pockets Of A Select Few Upon The Manipulating As Exploitation Found Within These Cracks Be This Flesh; A Chorus Line Of Puppets Playing Puppets, LOL. ˜ Sweet Your Beauty's Beautiful Visit! ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

    Essence Avatar Gypsyof Essence Date: 3/13/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ;D
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:59:00 AM

    Your ABC poem rocks baby

    Essence Avatar Gypsyof Essence Date: 3/7/2013 4:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for encouraging me to write it xo