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Moon Is My Muse

The chill of night holds old remorse Like some old song I've heard before And though a half moon knows the chords Such crescent music strays off course Through dark of night all eyes are blinded Such slender light, so small upturned With strains of sadness so aligned Where even stars weep sad nocturnes Please moon, become the whole you are I need your lamp to see me through Although there are one million stars This night is lonely without you So slight your smile that fills the eye Each falling star will search the sky
___________________________________ For Russell's Contest: Moon Is My Muse 3/3/13

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:44:00 PM

    A beautifully written tribute to a Muse, as fine as I have seeM

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:48:00 PM

    Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Congrats on your creative win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 5:27:00 PM

    Congrats Carrie. :-)

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:08:00 PM

    this is a beautiful sonnetCarrie, makes me want to read it again, I would be sorry had i missed reading this one, am going to rread this again..something so nostagic about this especially the secon para..congrads is all I can say, i rate this at the very top.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:48:00 AM

    Wonderful again Carrie--thank you for sharing!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:57:00 PM

    I like this one very much. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:05:00 PM

    Carrie, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Just like the moon, you're the brightest of them all! Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:05:00 AM

    Fantastic sonnet! First four lines are awesome and I like the final couplet. Cheers!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:26:00 AM

    This is wonderful, Carrie! The first four lines are pure gold!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:44:00 PM

    You paint me a pretty picture Carrie, In fact together I did a painting of a tea pot and a candle, sending you light for light my friend, good night sweet dreams xxx