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Aggravated by Squeaks

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Below is the poem entitled Aggravated by Squeaks which was written by poet Connie Gildersleeve. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Aggravated by Squeaks

My comfortable shoes are full of squeaks.
An unrelenting sound I can't possibly ignore,
Like an old wooden rocking chair that creaks
Or noisy wet sneakers on a tile floor.
It's quite loud and not only noticed by me, eek!
I've tried tip-toeing but it's causing footsore.
I'm aggravated beyond belief with these squeaks.



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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Congratulations Connie :-) ...Donna

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
    I squeaked with laughter the first time I read this and I'm still squeaking... You're really squeaking me out here, Connie...Stop it now wouldja? My tummy hurts...

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Hi Connie, this is a wonderful grook, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Nicely done in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 1:55:00 PM
    Cute one..Those shoes that squeak are annoying for sure..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Great grook Connie and a great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 8:03:00 AM
    more squeaky shoes , well done Connie I must listen out for some lol xx

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 5:51:00 AM
    That old sqeaky shoe. A great write and a deserving win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Oh, I really like this grook. I see many people are choosing the old squeaky shoe one. haha

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/6/2013 2:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea. I enjoyed writing it. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:04:00 AM
    just love this Connie, anything especially in poetry, that is different, i'm a fool for.. and so i love this....

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/5/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry for your kind comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:04:00 PM
    So what?...Let um squeak!...I'm squeaking with laughter...good one Connie! - Tim

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm happy I put laughter in your breath with this little squeaky Grook. Thank you for your delightful comment Tim. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Squeaky cute.....:-) :-) :-) :-)

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Connie try slippers...wonderful write...David

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sometime we have to grow a tough skiing for those who do not try to understand. I'm happy I put a tickle in your breath with this poem. Thank you Mandy for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:47:00 PM
    Oh Connie i love this, I do not possess a pair of shoes i only have trainers, the last pair fo shoes I had which had to have iron bars put through, they clicked and squeaked you could here me coming from miles away i had to grow a tough skin then but this so tickled me xx

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mandy sometimes we must grow a thick skin for those that does not care to understand. I'm happy I could put a tickle in your breath. Thank you for stopping by and for your comment. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Cute one..Enjoyed reading it..Yes, comfortable shoes are hard to find..Sad when one finds a comfortable pair and they squeak..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara thank you for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Ha Ha, this is a cleverly written write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a tremendously squeaky piece, such a true poem(we all love our comfortable shoes!) Great Work!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 3/4/2013 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Russell I'm happy I could put a laugh in your breath with this poem. Thanks for your delightful comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie