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Ellip Who

#1

I sustain 
sweet smile
how bout you?

 
#2 

mundane night
in the dark
my desk light


Ellip Contest
3-3-13

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  1. Hicks Avatar
    Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/22/2013 12:09:00 AM
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    Very interesting haiku work (the second was my favorite... even if rhymes feel somewhat strange in haiku). I haven't heard about the contest, but the "night owl" in me appreciates me the thoughts that went into writing this. Cool poem!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/14/2013 2:58:00 AM
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    Like this haiku! - Well done! - (We think so well after nightfall, let your light burn.) - Luck in contest!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    cherl dunn
    Date: 3/13/2013 4:47:00 PM
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    Ok believe me I know what you are saying here a late night trying to write. and you just can't sleep right until you finish. good right it reminds to pick up a new light bulb my went out.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 3/13/2013 8:32:00 AM
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    Hello my dear friend and libramate! I'm so glad to read this amazing poem of yours. i love it so much and the form. Thank you so much for sharing again your gem! Thank you also for my awesome placement again in your contest. I'm greatly honored! Thank you so much! Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 3/7/2013 11:02:00 AM
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    Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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    David Williams
    Date: 3/7/2013 3:26:00 AM
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    M-n-M ha I love this, good luck...David
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    ... Gigno
    Date: 3/4/2013 9:10:00 PM
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    !!!
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    David Williams
    Date: 3/3/2013 1:32:00 PM
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    SandyIvy, just great good luck...David
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 3/3/2013 10:23:00 AM
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    ‡ I Love Your Beauty's M&M, Perfect For Saint Patty's Day, Sweet Beautiful Sandy ˜ Hold Onto That Smile And Don't Let The Mundane Sweep The Dreams ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *


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