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Below is the poem entitled STOP THE WAR which was written by poet Neldy Jolo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Today I am crying
I am crying that my brothers are fighting
The fighting started from historical claim
The claim that never any sides to give in
Today my tears fell to my bosom
I am anxious to what happen

Why never the peace is reign?
Why war shall be the end?
Why the people love to kill?
Why there is no way to end without blood spill?

I am not superman to stop the falling tears
I wanted to embrace my brothers to say please stop!
Please stop the war that spills blood.
I wanted to cry out loud but my sober is louder

Please end the war 
Stop and give ending
There would be no winner fighting between brothers
The only winner in war is “loser” for fighting with brothers
There must be other ways - to the end the bloodshed!
Please stop it, stop the war!!!
Stop the war!
Stop the fighting!
Stoppppppppppppppppppp the War!!!!!
Where are you UNNNNNNNNN?

Sunday, 3rd March 2013

A poem for the current skirmish in Lahad Datu and Semporna
Sabah, Malaysia. Let us all pray for PEACE! 

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Brother, my prayers are with you, and our fellowmen.

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 3:41:00 PM
    wow... love it...powerful...linda

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:29:00 PM
    This is a very powerful as well as beautiful poem. Many across the world share your dream...blessings

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    Date: 3/4/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna. I blessed to have u all.
    Jolo Avatar Neldy Jolo
    Date: 3/4/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna. I am blessed to have u all.