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The Lovers Dance

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The Lovers Dance

Across the table they stared and yet not a word was heard
They saw into the soul of each, some would say 'that’s absurd'
The fingers of the lovers sparked, as they walked in unison
Through the door the lovers dance, as they danced they danced as one

The dance floor called the sheets so white; they slipped beneath them with joy
The lovers dance this love so deep between this girl and new found boy.
Each step they danced, each move they made the dance just carried on 
Throughout the hours the thief stole time but no fear the magic would never be gone.

Between the sheets the lovers did dance and each step they both did feel
This rhythm in the lovers dance each undulation it now did heal 
The lovers tango as yet unfulfilled, it kept them dancing hard and long
To complete the dance they both desired, this lover’s dance will never be wrong

The dance of the lovers, twisting and turning, as one their bodies entwine
The dance the lovers did complete, unabashed, unashamed and just divine. 

© ~GG~ 03/03/2013

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
    A Sonnet sharing & showing the ballroom-dance( U know what I mean :-) ) ... LOVED reading this one too. xoxo

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:27:00 PM
    well done Mandy .....Seren

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:59:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:27:00 AM
    wow! I like your poem friend Mandy..Congratulations on your great win in PD's contest. Have a blessed day always, Love Maria

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Great poem and win, Mandy!....I'll two-step to that tune...

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:56:00 AM
    Mandy I knew you'd place on this beautiful poem. Congrats on your win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Mandy, ;-) congratulations with your sweet and awesome win, in my any poem goes contest. Good Night~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 6:04:00 PM
    Mandolin!! You are playin some music here!!--Love it!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:01:00 PM
    This is the dance nearly EVERYONE knows how to do. But as in the actual dance world, there are skilled ones and ones not so skilled, I can imagine. haha. VERY nice!!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 4:27:00 PM
    A choreography of feelings culminating in a superb unifying act! Beautiful! Thank you!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:21:00 PM
    your imagination and creation, amaze me Girl, a dance floor of white sheets, wow chance would be a fine thing...love this wonderful poem...

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Dear Sis, Good day Hope this finds YOU and Ours Healthy and High in the Spirit. The Passion in YOUR POETRY is so Captivating. I do remember a time Lenore and I had just such a Dance. I assume YOU have done this Dance also as YOUR Vivid description indicates Loving Pen I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother Eternal...Harry

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:32:00 AM
    This is a very impressive write my dear friend Mandy! I love it and the form. I haven't tried yet a sonnet but I hope i can write one when I've enough time. An excellent sonnet indeed! By the way, is this for a contest? Well, an awesome winning piece again for me. Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by. My belated congratulations also in all your wins. I love all your poems and you're one of my fav. poets! More power and blessings to you always! love and big sweet hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 6:08:00 AM
    Mandy what a beautiful dance of love. I love "The dance floor called the sheets so white." Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Very charming and upbeat...sounds like a song.?..loved it Mandy

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    Date: 3/4/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna, glad you liked it xx
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:04:00 PM
    A delight to read, Mandy. Well done! Love, Annalise

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    Date: 3/4/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Annalise luv xx
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:02:00 PM
    Really a beautiful picture that depicted through your words Mandy,I really enjoy this read in my morning :D wishing you a wonderful day, hug, Yanny

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 3/4/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And hope you do too Yanny luv xx
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:05:00 PM
    It sounds like lover's intertwined, beautiful as a nice glass of heady red wine, have a great Sunday my friend, and I hope you keep entertaining that muse of yours, when your done, you know whereto send it, xxx

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    Date: 3/4/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    bless you flower xx
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Very expressive work about the lover's dance...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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    Date: 3/4/2013 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks sara xx
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