Lover by Tracy Marie Windisch Mason

You slip The canvass Of this soul Wrap around Words Like lilies Catch within Breathe Steal the Very light Of me Stem within leaves Out of Love Liquid lines You shine In want Kill me Within Your Poetry -------

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/9/2013 11:41:00 AM

'...breathe steal,' '...liquid lines you shine,' super assonance and alliteration. A lovely poem which exudes adoration! Well done Tracy!! Best wishes, Keith (PS many thanks for your visit and your kind remarks... the second piece you reviewed is about a BOOK and its restoration)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2013 9:43:00 AM

PS... i know you do not know me...but, i came here to STEAL a line from you...LOL.... "Kill me softly with poetry"""... he he he...love it... and i will use it... SO! I hope you will not mind.. by the way thank you for giving me awesome poetry to read... LINDA

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 3/9/2013 3:29:00 AM

You bring smiles.You can borrow any lines.It is an honour you asked,thank you,DearestLinda.God bless you.I wrote a poem for you and Dear little four leaf clover.xoxoxo,Tracy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2013 9:40:00 AM

Tracy, if all your poetry is wonderful like, I will come back and read it all during the week... I already added you as a favorite poet after reading 5 other poems of yours... some i did not comment because I'm on my phone right now. by the way love the ending... kill me with your poetry.. that would be a nice death in my book... i love your work... truly.. i like the small simple way you express poetry through free verse... pd

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 3/9/2013 3:52:00 AM

Dearest Linda, You truly make my heart shine,within your lovely words.Poetry to me ,is in some unescapable dream.It seems you never wake up from within its want.If by chance, I might occasionally grasp,then for a moment,Im satisfied.Your writing to me ,is beautiful.Never let go.Keep on Shining.xoxox,Tracy.

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 8:02:00 AM

Tracy I love all of this, it is beautiful and the format works very well...David

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 3/3/2013 8:08:00 AM

Dear David, Thank you so much,Your comments touch,and tonight you are my shining star.God bless you,and yours,Tracy.xo.

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 3/3/2013 4:05:00 AM

‡ What Is More Beautiful Then The Beauty Of Love, Sweet Beautiful TracyMarie ˜ Poetry, Is Merely An Artistic Reflection, Touching Lightly The Truest Depths In It's Most Divine Of Enchanting Splendour ˜ The Sweetest Words A Heart Shan't Die, But Live, The Most Wonderful Her Love's, Beautiful Light! ˜ I Love The Beauty My Heart Finds In Your Treasures Verse ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 3/3/2013 6:12:00 AM

Dearest Rachel Your words touch like butterfly, Then dive to depths no one touches.I am full of gratitude for your beautiful response.Truly,you have no idea how grateful I am,for your lovely words.God bless you,within all that you do.Have you any idea,just how beautiful you are?I can tell,simply by your words.Wishing you love,Tracy.xo.

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