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Steamy Affair

I see you in deep thought of me,
and I ask myself if I should ripple your complexion..?

I gaze in those reflective eyes,
And simmer yet swim in those limpid pupils,
Staining your liquid sheets.

While subtle things begin to heat...
...Love’s stir infuses us as one concoction.

As souring...sweaty lemon juice… 
...beads from both of our shiny brows,
…I lowly steep in you.

Bubbling suds of passion,
...conclude our boiling saga.

I in you...you on me...water and tea,
Together we make...a nice warm beverage…
…for the world to sip our love.

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Excellent write here...I truly love the word play!! Very creative piece!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Wow...your words just keep getting better and better.Its feels so nice to.read 'you' again.One my favourite poets ever.Going tmfvs

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/5/2013 11:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You were are always an.inspiration Raul.You and Ruben were my first two inspirers to.imtroduce me to haiku.Hope We ll.see a lot of your poetry Raul..
    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/5/2013 11:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for the wonderful words. It's nice to see you guys as well. I hope to inspire and find inspiration. I need to catch up and read some of your work...
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:09:00 AM
    You're coming back with a romantic mood; I think I remember the original version. Im glad to see you posting again, Raul. Keep writing...dont be shy! : D

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/5/2013 11:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I've neer been shy to write, just busy. Glad to see you are still active here.
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Wow, Raul........your poetry has evolved and grown and is wonderfully sensual in this particular piece. I would love to see you posting more of your work. So nice to have you back! :)

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/5/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's always nice to be back here, I enjoy seeing the familiar names mixed with the new.
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Raul a very romantic piece of work ...David

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/5/2013 11:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I like putting a spin on normal things.