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long and winding road for Beatlemania contest

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long and winding road for Beatlemania contest

In my dreams I sing this song
That I am walking to your door
That I would be where I belong
Would be in your arms evermore

Reality is when I awake
Dried tears upon my face
Distraught making my body shake
Of you there is no trace

You died suddenly so very young
No time to live, no hopes no fun
We were just starting to play loves song
Your gone just like the setting sun

My life is different now, but still I try
To find you, you still have that hold
When alone I sit reminisce and cry
Walking that long winding road



03 March 2013

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Seren.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:25:00 PM

    many congrats on your win poppet sorry it's a bit late xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/15/2013 3:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thx Mandy........Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on a great win Seren :-)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/14/2013 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awww thx Donna ..... Seren
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:43:00 PM

    Congratulations on a super win, Seren! I love your poem and this is one of my favorite Beatles song. Always, Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/14/2013 1:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Annalise ......Seren
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:04:00 PM

    congrats on your win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops I wrote that in the wrong place thanks Joseph. It is midnight and I am falling asleep....Seren
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you David, I jusy scraped in lol....Seren
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "just"
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Seren congrats on your win, great journey...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops see above rofl
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:44:00 PM

    Seren this is such a heart felt poem, so real in feeling. Take care, and congrats on your win. Rick

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Rick...Seren
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Wow.......this breaks the heart, the road you took us down is so sad and melancholy. Would be wonderful lyrics for a sad sad song. well done, Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie...Seren
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Seren, heartfelt write about this inspiration!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:58:00 PM

    This is such a moving, heart-wrenching poem, Seren. You did a wonderful job using this song title. Congrats on your win in my contest :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Heather
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:33:00 PM

    A moving write that touches the heart, you have done this song title justice! Hugs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/9/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:05:00 AM

    Seren a great entree for the contest and I suspect a lot of truth in it....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes David as you know, its the truth ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:45:00 AM

    Hi sweetie this is tremendous and I can feel your pain luv, well done xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy, dont know why i keep opening the wound....Seren
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:08:00 AM

    Oh mercy me Seren...this is heartbreaking and beautiful...is it from a true-life experience? Have you seen the documentary 'Let it Be'?...A must see! They did an unannouced rooftop performance of 'Oh Daring'....priceless - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes its true Tim my bf had a brain tumour, its been a hard road...Being here with friends have helped....Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 11:24:00 PM

    seren, I love how you took that famous song title of the Beatles and made it your own. GREAT writing!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/3/2013 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea... I was hoping it worked ok....Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:25:00 PM

    That was a lovely song and your poem is a great tribute to the Beatles xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/2/2013 10:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:48:00 PM

    This is such a beautifully sad write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this special poem this evening! What a lovely piece, you have delighted me to no end with this write, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Russell....Seren