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Dreaming

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Dreaming

I sat up in my bed 
From the dream in my head
Thought I saw a unicorn prancing by
As I watched hummingbirds flutter near by
I felt the ladybugs land on my head
It was a happy day for sure, as I found laughter 
 in my head.



That mean old mama,,,, she treats you like an old shoe ,,,, I treat you like a rose in my heart !

11am  3/2/ 2013
I wrote the dreaming one this morning , my six yr old g-daughter stated the other one to me last night. ,,, Londyn thought her mom, my daughter was coming home after work, though she went to office b-day party, that's why Londyn said that,,,,so I'm giving her credit.  


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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 2:13:00 AM

    just a bit of rhyme and flow, well done here toe by toe :) well done ....

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Really precious poem, I love it :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:30:00 PM

    wonderful and inspiring Debbie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:59:00 AM

    So sweet and endearing! A hug for you and your darling granddaughter for this magical poem. Keith

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 12:45:00 AM

    Nice one!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:32:00 PM

    oh yes, what you said about your haiku. Please don't be afraid to post modern haiku. 5/7/5 is actually less acceptable these days. I for one almost prefer to see the other kind!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:31:00 PM

    this is adorable and including your daughter that way!! hmmm, I was gonna tell you something. Let me go back to the comment you made to me. Maybe it had something to do with that. If not, I guess I forgot what I meant to tell you!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:06:00 AM

    impressive write sweet Debbie..like it so much :) <3 Sk

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:51:00 AM

    Excellent write with lovely words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 4:25:00 AM

    Interesting dream...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:49:00 PM

    That was cool..... Thanks for sharing... xx

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:19:00 PM

    A wonderful write, loved it

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:15:00 PM

    Small and large poets .... makes a very good job! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:51:00 AM

    Debbie excellent words from both of you...David

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:59:00 PM

    You have a very kind heart which is the genesis of "dreaming". Have many happy days in this wonderful world since you are blessed with a beautiful grand daughter.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Sounds like there are two poets in the family...very sweet :-) :-)