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Beautiful Muse

She is draped over a chair, 
Artfully fashioned
Like a fine piece 
Of silk.
He imagines that her softness 
Would sweetly mould into
His hands
Like ripe fruit.
She stays still and silent, 
Letting him consume her
With his hungry eyes.
He drinks her in, 
The fullness of her breast, 
The gentle curve of her hip
And the honeyed tones of her
Naked skin.
Her natural beauty
Has him mesmerised....
Lips apart, 
Heart pounding, 
Motionless.
He feels the heat of creation rise in him
And with power and purpose, 
His eyes break contact as
He touches
His brush
To the canvas.

© 2012
Ruby Honeytip

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 11:41:00 PM

    You've painted a beautiful word picture! Enjoyed every line!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Wow! This is fantastic. I love how short you've kept most of the lines - mimicking the rapid heartbeat or shallow breaths of the artist. Adding this to my faves!

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/18/2013 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Heather, You are the first to ever pick up on why the lines are set out in that way :-) Thank you for your kind observations......Love Ruby xxx
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Wow-this is classy, I love it. Cheers. Rick

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/18/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick <3
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:56:00 AM

    Artistically written. Classy, Ruby :)

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/18/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have added you to my fave poets :-) Thanks for your kind words....Roobs xx
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 6:49:00 AM

    Ruby I immediately thought of that famous picture of Christine Keeler on the chair, I love the way you tantalised and teased the reader, Lucien Freud would be proud of this..excellent....David

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/18/2013 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David...thank you so much for your comment. It means so much to me....Love Ruby xx
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Ahh, Ruby Honeytip. Don't you do this sort of thing so beautifully. If I was a teenager I might paper my bedroom wall with your poetry.

    Honeytip Avatar Ruby Honeytip Date: 3/18/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't worry about that Red....I'll send you some pictures lol <3 hahaha...kidding x
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 3:40:00 PM

    ................ ‡ I Am Going To Also Favour Your Lovely Beauty, If I Have Not Thus Far, Sweet Beautiful Ruby ˜ Have A Very Wonderful Evening &, 'Sweet Kisses.' *

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 3:34:00 PM

    ‡ Wow, This Is Hot And Your Beauty Describes Her Splendours Amid Such Wonderful As Loving Details, Sweet Beautiful Ruby ˜ Not Only Would He Alone Drink Her Treasures Within But Also I, For She Is Sooo Beautiful! ˜ What A Somewhat Unique As Exceptional Painting And I Am Going To Joyfully Favour It's Magnificent Beauty ˜ Super Ku's Unto A True Masterpiece In Art And Thank You, Beautiful Girl, For Your Gifted Heart's Kind Warm Visits; 'Echos' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *